Title and description feedback

Hi! I’m looking for feedback on my new story description!
Title; Through My Eyes
Description: Through Hali’s eyes, getting abused was the worst thing ever but when she falls in love with Damon he not only broke her heart, he ruined her soul. Can she redeem herself?
What do you think?
Is it intriguing?
Would you read it?
Any tips to make it better?

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To Hali, nothing was worse than being abused. Until she fell in love. Will love destroy her? Can she ever fully recover? Find out by reading: Through My Eyes

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Thank you

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