Title suggestions needed!

Hey y’all!!
:black_medium_small_square:First off, I’ll give you a shout-out and/or promote your story IF I choose your title suggestion!! :raised_hands:
:black_medium_small_square:Secondly, I need a story title asap! I don’t like the title I have & want a new one. Feel free to leave suggestions. :blush:

My current title: Atmosphere
My previous title: Thin Air

Story Description: On Kalaya island, people with “powers” are treated unfairly. There will be a time to fight for fairness. Trust will be broken & lives will be taken. Will it be worth it?

Thanks in advance!! :two_hearts::two_hearts:

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Lol I was able to come up with these:

-Broken trust
-Determined
-Lost in The Unknown
-Survival
-Mistaken
-Till Death Do Us part

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No Justice or Now or Never (I know they are bad, but it was the only i could come up with :joy:)

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Some of my ideas:
The cursed
Cursed powers
The fight for powers
The unfair truth
Kalaya Island (why not?)

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Lol, let’s try :crazy_face:

Outlast
Withstand
Survival
Dishonest. ??
Let Down
Next up

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out of air
breathless
superior
solders
broken?
Pm me if you choose any of these

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Maybe The war of justice?

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The Oppressed?

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I could give it a try :astonished:

Quick question though, @writtenby.dee .
Do you mind if I ask why you chose your previous titles for your story? I could probably get a better sense of what you might be looking for if you do :grinning:

Edit: Correct me if I’m wrong, but I’m guessing your MC might have powers or something that has to do with air ?

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The MC and others appear out of thin air/portal into earth. They’re from a different “planet”. Hopefully that answers your question & let me know if you have any more!!

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That was definitely helpful! :smile:
For now, the only title that came to my mind was:

Dispersed
(Or the present tense form of the word, which would just be Disperse)

It has multiple definitions that I think fit your story details relatively well, such as the act of something disappearing out of thin air, being separated/segregated widely across a certain region, and having the possibility of going in many different directions.

I’ll try to think of something better in the meantime :sweat_smile:

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The only ones I can think of right now:
Fresh air
Air from a different planet
Attack from the air

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Hello! :wave:t3:

These aren’t great but here are some ideas: :woman_shrugging:t2:

  • Discriminated,
  • One for all,
  • Powerful,
  • Polluted Atmosphere,
  • Our Downfall,
  • Fight for fairness,
  • This Society,
  • Where the sun, don’t shine,
  • Corruption,

I hope they might of helped. :joy:

Lots of love,
Ari x

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I’m gunna roll with the air theme lol

Until Our Last Breath
When There Was Wind
Just Breathe
War with the Winds
Open Air

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-The Unjust
-Justice is Served
-No Rights, No Freedom (idk)
That’s all I got :slight_smile:

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I chose your title. Congrats!! Do you have an instagram?

Awesome! I don’t have an insta so you can credit my forum name if you want but I don’t need credit either way. :blush: Glad to help!

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