Hey y’all!!
First off, I’ll give you a shout-out and/or promote your story IF I choose your title suggestion!!
Secondly, I need a story title asap! I don’t like the title I have & want a new one. Feel free to leave suggestions.
My current title: Atmosphere
My previous title: Thin Air
Story Description: On Kalaya island, people with “powers” are treated unfairly. There will be a time to fight for fairness. Trust will be broken & lives will be taken. Will it be worth it?
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Quick question though, @writtenby.dee .
Do you mind if I ask why you chose your previous titles for your story? I could probably get a better sense of what you might be looking for if you do
Edit: Correct me if I’m wrong, but I’m guessing your MC might have powers or something that has to do with air ?
The MC and others appear out of thin air/portal into earth. They’re from a different “planet”. Hopefully that answers your question & let me know if you have any more!!
That was definitely helpful!
For now, the only title that came to my mind was:
Dispersed
(Or the present tense form of the word, which would just be Disperse)
It has multiple definitions that I think fit your story details relatively well, such as the act of something disappearing out of thin air, being separated/segregated widely across a certain region, and having the possibility of going in many different directions.
I’ll try to think of something better in the meantime