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Thx for the follow! And no, I don’t mind!

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Thank you. You can do it as a post. you really are the best

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:heart_eyes: You welcome! :)))

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Hello! Still doing reviews?

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Yes!

Looking forward to it!
Story: The perfect crime
Genre: Mystery
Author: Steph
Description: The perfect crime does not exist… RIGHT?!
Find the clues, solve the case, and find the killer … before he kills YOU!
choices matter in this story!
Cover: image
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6444735233327104

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Title: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Description: Tossed into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? FullCC, CM, MiniGames
Art Style: Secret Surprise
Cover:


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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Okay! I’m done with your story! Here is the review!

Your story has a great plot to begin with! I like how each character is their own creature! But the characters are in the basic spot placements almost all the time! I’d like to see places like parties and school where it’s more crowded! It feels unrealistic when only one person is outside the garage! I also realized that you keep on using the same music all the time. You don’t want to annoyed your readers! But besides that, your directing is good!

Here is your grade…:drum: :drum: :drum:

77/100 = B-

I would love it if you could review my story :))
Title - Ghost of Mona
Description - Jenny thought that she was a normal girl but one night she found out that she could…
Style - Ink
Cover - Screenshot_20190621_160646
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How many episodes I want to review - first 3
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5459494207553536

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Thanks! There must be an error in the music changes, I’ll double check.

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Okay! I will start reviewing your story!

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Thank you! I hope you like it :blush:

To everyone who I said that I will do your request, I will NOT finish your request. I’m just not in the mood for doing that.

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