ℍ𝕠𝕡𝕖‘𝕤 𝔸𝕣𝕥 𝕊𝕙𝕠𝕡!

[hope.epyy]

𝗪𝗲𝗹𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗺𝘆 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝘀𝗵𝗼𝗽! 𝗜𝗺 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗼 𝗵𝗲𝗹𝗽 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝗼𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝗻𝗲𝗲𝗱𝘀.

𝗛𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝘆𝗼𝘂‘𝗹𝗹 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗱 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗜 𝗰𝗮𝗻 𝗺𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗮 𝗳𝗲𝘄 𝗼𝗳 𝗺𝘆 𝗲𝘅𝗮𝗺𝗽𝗹𝗲𝘀!( 𝗡𝗢𝗧𝗘: 𝗜𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗱𝗼𝗻‘𝘁 𝘀𝗲𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗶𝗲𝗰𝗲 𝗼𝗳 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗱𝗼𝗻‘𝘁 𝗵𝗲𝘀𝗶𝘁𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗮𝘀𝗸!)

𝗘𝗫𝗔𝗠𝗣𝗟𝗘𝗦

1. 𝗗𝗢 𝗡𝗢𝗧 𝗽𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗺𝗲! 𝗜‘𝗺 𝗮 𝗯𝗲𝗴𝗶𝗻𝗻𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘂𝘁𝗵𝗼𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗜 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝘀𝗰𝗵𝗼𝗼𝗹 𝗺𝗼𝘀𝘁 𝗱𝗮𝘆𝘀 𝗼𝗳 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘄𝗲𝗲𝗸. 𝗜 𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗶𝗻𝗽𝗼𝗿𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘀𝗲 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝗶𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗹𝘆 𝗿𝘂𝘀𝗵 𝗺𝗲 𝗶𝘁 𝘄𝗶𝗻𝘁 𝗺𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝗯𝗲 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝗽𝗹𝗲𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗾𝘂𝗶𝗰𝗸𝗲𝗿.
2. 𝗡𝗢 𝗧𝗛𝗥𝗘𝗔𝗗 𝗛𝗢𝗣𝗣𝗜𝗡𝗚! 𝗜𝗻 𝗺𝘆 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝘀𝗵𝗼𝗽 𝗜‘𝗹𝗹 𝗺𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝘀𝘂𝗿𝗲 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗸𝗻𝗼𝘄 𝗶𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝗵𝗮𝘀 𝗯𝗲𝗲𝗻 𝗮𝗰𝗰𝗲𝗽𝘁𝗲𝗱. 𝗜 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸 𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗱 𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝗜 𝗰𝗿𝗲𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝗲𝘅𝘁𝗿𝗲𝗺𝗲𝗹𝘆 𝗿𝘂𝗱𝗲 𝗻𝗼𝘁 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝗺𝗲 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝘀𝗵𝗼𝗽 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺. 𝗜𝗳 𝗜 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗱 𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝗵𝗼𝗽𝗽𝗲𝗱, 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗯𝗲 𝗱𝗲𝗻𝗶𝗲𝗱.
3. 𝗖𝗥𝗘𝗗𝗜𝗧 𝗠𝗘! 𝗜𝘁‘𝘀 𝘀𝗶𝗺𝗽𝗹𝗲. 𝗗𝗼 𝗡𝗢𝗧 𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗮𝗹 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝗺𝗲! 𝗜𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗮𝗹 𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝗼𝗳 𝗺𝘆 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸 ( 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗰𝗶𝗻𝗴, 𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗼𝘂𝗿𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿, 𝗿𝗲𝗺𝗼𝘃𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗺𝘆 𝘄𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗿𝗺𝗮𝗿𝗸, 𝗲𝘁𝗰) 𝗜 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗿𝗲𝗽𝗼𝗿𝘁 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗻𝗼 𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗰𝗰𝗲𝗽𝘁 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁𝘀 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝘆𝗼𝘂!
4. 𝗣𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝘂𝘀𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝘀𝘀𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗶𝗻 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁. 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝘀𝘀𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗶𝘀 𝗘𝘀𝗽 𝗔𝗿𝘁
   
   𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴?:
   𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝗱𝗿𝗮𝘄𝗻 𝗼𝗿 𝗲𝗱𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗱?: ( 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝘄𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝘁𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿)
   𝗛𝗼𝘄 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝗱𝗼𝗲𝘀 𝗶𝘁 𝗶𝗻𝗰𝗹𝘂𝗱𝗲?:
   𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗻𝗲𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝘁 𝗱𝗼𝗻𝗲 𝗯𝘆 𝗮 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰 𝘁𝗶𝗺𝗲? 𝗜𝗳 𝘀𝗼 𝗽𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝘄𝗵𝗲𝗻:
   𝗣𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗶𝗻𝗰𝗹𝘂𝗱𝗲 𝗮 𝗽𝗶𝗰𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗲 𝗼𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿(𝘀) 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝗳 𝗽𝗼𝘀𝘀𝗶𝗯𝗹𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝗱𝗲𝘁𝗮𝗶𝗹𝘀 𝗮𝘀 𝘄𝗲𝗹𝗹:
   𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝗶𝗻𝗰𝗹𝘂𝗱𝗲𝗱? 𝗜𝗳 𝘀𝗼 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗱𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝘀𝗮𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰 𝗳𝗼𝗻𝘁 𝗼𝗿 𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗼𝘂𝗿?:
   𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗮 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰 𝗯𝗮𝗰𝗸𝗴𝗿𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁? 𝗜𝗳 𝘀𝗼 𝗽𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗽𝘂𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲:
   𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗽𝗼𝘀𝗲? 𝗣𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗽𝘂𝘁 𝗮 𝗽𝗼𝘀𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗳𝗲𝗿𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲 𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗼𝗿 𝘁𝗿𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗲𝘅𝗽𝗹𝗮𝗶𝗻 𝗶𝘁 𝗮𝘀 𝗯𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝗮𝘀 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗰𝗮𝗻:
   𝗣𝗔𝗦𝗦𝗪𝗢𝗥𝗗:

[Grottino]

Hello! Do you do reviews?

[Episode.Christi]

𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗾𝘂𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴?: An art scene!
𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝗱𝗿𝗮𝘄𝗻 𝗶𝗿 𝗲𝗱𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗱?: ( 𝗗𝗿𝗮𝘄𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝘁𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿) Drawn please!
𝗛𝗼𝘄 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝗱𝗼𝗲𝘀 𝗶𝘁 𝗶𝗻𝗰𝗹𝘂𝗱𝗲?: 1
𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗻𝗲𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝘁 𝗱𝗼𝗻𝗲 𝗯𝘆 𝗮 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰 𝘁𝗶𝗺𝗲? 𝗜𝗳 𝘀𝗼 𝗽𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝘄𝗵𝗲𝗻: N/A Take your time! No rush.
𝗣𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗶𝗻𝗰𝗹𝘂𝗱𝗲 𝗮 𝗽𝗶𝗰𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗲 𝗼𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿(𝘀) 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝗳 𝗽𝗼𝘀𝘀𝗶𝗯𝗹𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝗱𝗲𝘁𝗮𝗶𝗹𝘀 𝗮𝘀 𝘄𝗲𝗹𝗹:

(He has freckles!)
𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝗶𝗻𝗰𝗹𝘂𝗱𝗲𝗱? 𝗜𝗳 𝘀𝗼 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗱𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝘀𝗮𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰 𝗳𝗼𝗻𝘁 𝗼𝗿 𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗼𝘂𝗿?: None!
𝗗𝗼 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗮 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰 𝗯𝗮𝗰𝗸𝗴𝗿𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁? 𝗜𝗳 𝘀𝗼 𝗽𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗽𝘂𝘁 𝗶𝘁 𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲: N/A Can it be a png/overlay?
𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗽𝗼𝘀𝗲? 𝗣𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗽𝘂𝘁 𝗮 𝗽𝗼𝘀𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗳𝗲𝗿𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲 𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗼𝗿 𝘁𝗿𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗲𝘅𝗽𝗹𝗮𝗶𝗻 𝗶𝘁 𝗮𝘀 𝗯𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝗮𝘀 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗰𝗮𝗻:
Something like this pose-wise:

Like he’s being talked to but he’s uninterested and looking to the side, thinking about other stuff.
PASSWORD: Esp Art

Thank you!

[hope.epyy]

Yes I do! x

[hope.epyy]

Thank you your request has been accepted! I will start it ASAP. X

[Grottino]

Could you review some chapters of my story: the Red Curtain ?

[hope.epyy]

Yes of course!

[hope.epyy]

Here you go @Episode.Christi I hope you like it! X

[hope.epyy]

Story Review
By: @hope.epyy ( instagram @hope.epy)
Story: The Red Curtain
Author/Forums Name: Grottino @Grottino

Story Description: You are a teenage boy trying to find your own voice in lyrical opera, friendship, love and family. It all started 2 years ago, the night you came out…

Genre: Drama

Style: Limelight

Chapter Total: 7 (not completed)

Plot Summary: The plot was so interesting. It was so good to see a male mc who is also bisexual.

Spelling/punctuation & syntax: There were no spelling or grammatical errors at all throughout the story.
15/15

Choices: Customisation was included in the story but there weren’t very many choices included so try and add some in.
10/20

Directing skills: The directing was amazing. There were a good use of backgrounds and there weren’t any character misplacements either.
20/20

Music effects/sound effects: Ther weren’t any sound or music effects used throughout the story so try and add some in.
0/25

Chapter Length: The chapter length was perfect! It wasn’t too short or too long.
20/20

Overall Total: Overall, this story was so good but try and add some music and choices to make the story even better.
60/100

[Grottino]

How many chapters did u read?

[hope.epyy]

3 x

[Grottino]

Oh, ok, ty for your review!

[Episode.Christi]

Thank you so much! That looks fantastic! How do you want me to credit you?

[hope.epyy]

Just credit me at the end of the chapter of your story x