ℍ𝕠𝕡𝕖‘𝕤 𝔸𝕣𝕥 𝕊𝕙𝕠𝕡!

Story Review
By: @hope.epyy ( instagram @hope.epy)
Story: The Red Curtain
Author/Forums Name: Grottino @Grottino

Story Description: You are a teenage boy trying to find your own voice in lyrical opera, friendship, love and family. It all started 2 years ago, the night you came out…

Genre: Drama

Style: Limelight

Chapter Total: 7 (not completed)

Plot Summary: The plot was so interesting. It was so good to see a male mc who is also bisexual.

Spelling/punctuation & syntax: There were no spelling or grammatical errors at all throughout the story.
15/15

Choices: Customisation was included in the story but there weren’t very many choices included so try and add some in.
10/20

Directing skills: The directing was amazing. There were a good use of backgrounds and there weren’t any character misplacements either.
20/20

Music effects/sound effects: Ther weren’t any sound or music effects used throughout the story so try and add some in.
0/25

Chapter Length: The chapter length was perfect! It wasn’t too short or too long.
20/20

Overall Total: Overall, this story was so good but try and add some music and choices to make the story even better.
60/100