Hi Iโm back! Wellโฆ kinda. I will be reviewing the requests I got through dm. You can still request but I will review them when the reveal contest deadline is over or when I finished my three chapters already. Request again if I couldnโt do yours due to me leaving and did not ask one on dm!
why I left for a while
This thread is closed due to me not standing this toxicity anymore. Episode has to listen to all the threads instead of saying โwe are looking into itโ and at the same time closing the thread!
That being said: if you really want a review from me, dm me on my instagram! And if this thread is going to be unlisted: please donโt. It wonโt make your case better. And people can learn from my reviews as well.
Instagram: @abinaya.writes
Hello and welcome to this review thread!
An honest critic will be given in a respectful way. I will pick a winner each week for a โstory of the week awardโ. This means you will get a promotion from me on a separate thread which will be added here for the following week and you will be added to my โSOTWโ highlight. The link to that thread will be on my website as well. You can find my website through my profile or Instagram.
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- I will review your first chapter.
- If your story is not published: send me a message down below that you want a review and pm me afterward with the required information.
- if your story is published: send the link down below!
- The moment Iโve liked your comment, Iโve accepted the request.
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โถ FIRST IMPRESSION:
cover/ splashes
description
โถ CREATIVITY
โถ BUILD OF STORY
dialogue
choices
animations
music
โถ CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT/PERSONALITY
โถ FLOW
rushing scenes
story length
unnecessary scenes
โถ DIRECTING LEVEL
CC templates/outfit games
mini games
overlays
background characters
โถ DO I WANT TO READ MORE?
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โถ Title:
โถ Author:
โถ Genre:
โถ Description:
โถ Style:
โถ Published/unpublished:
โถ Story link (if published):
โถ I want a grade with my review: yes/no
โถ Note to me (optional):
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DO NOT send your link down below if your story is not published yet! There is a reason why I added that to the rules. People will get your friends link and will be able to read without passes.
All reviews will be given in this thread. Tell me if you want otherwise (pm/Instagram).
Do not try to rush me! I want to make helpful reviews and that will take time. Donโt worry if Iโve liked your comment!
I donโt want to bring anyone down with my feedback! We are here to help each other and not bringing each other down.
I wonโt be helping on a regular bases. It just doesnโt work for me to do that. So donโt pm/dm me with โcould you review this againโ or โhow can I do thisโ. But yes, we can have a conversation about your review. Just donโt contact me with new questions or anything like that 'cuz I only gave you the review as a guide and itโs your responsibility to see if youโre satisfied with the result.
Let me know if you have any questions regarding my review. If you want to talk about this, dm me on instagram @abinaya.writes.
Password: kindness is key <3
blur this password as well!
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โถ @episode.mistletoe
โถ @maree_s
โถ @episode.michellerose
โถ @khushboo
โถ @May.I.Write
โถ @lqwalter
โถ @Superpup
โถ @Ducky1
โถ @Seep_Mukta
๐ช๐ถ๐ด๐ท๐ณ๐ฌ๐ป๐ฌ๐ซ ๐น๐ฌ๐ฝ๐ฐ๐ฌ๐พ๐บ
@Phoenix_11037 - Squad: fulfillment
@Stxrylines - Maid of Honour
@zerocantwrite - MY NAME IS YOU
@archh_07 - Hide and Seek
@Anya_R - Ley Lines
@hamnah.epi - Just the Bodyguard
@khushboo - How I met a millionaire
@Kristina.Cer - Riot
@Iconic.chelsea - The 7 Deadly Sins
@BrandyJude - Midnight Moon
@Days - (Un)Eligible Bachelor
@xoxoalynam - Whoโs She?
@Fiffy - Ice Crime
Iโm not a proofreader! If you want a proofreader: Andrea T.'s Grammar Proofreading Thread (CLOSED to catch up)
DM me on Instagram (@abinaya.writes) if you want to talk about this review!
Doing this will take a lot of time and effort so Iโm only asking for a credit in advance.
@abinaya.writes <3