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I didn’t find anything needed fixing in this story! What a DRAMATIC ending! I am truly shocked! I think maybe the playing soccer part could’ve been more interesting, maybe a soccer ball overlay? I don’t know but this was pretty awesome!
Best of luck!

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Thank you and yeah, everything of the above is fixed in future episodes!

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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it! :blush:

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I actually really liked the story, honestly it was perfect. I don’t know what to say :grin: great job!

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My story is called Sophisticated & Deceived :slight_smile:

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Yeah the three first chapters are REALLY BAD but it was because I was new there and I just figueret out how it all works, but thank you for the feedback

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Hey have you writtin any story’s, I would LOVE to read them

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It’s okay my first one would’ve been worseπŸ˜‰

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I am writing one, but it won’t be published for a long time, again because I had OCD it’s kinda still a part of me and I won’t be able to publish it knowing everything’s perfect :joy: :joy:

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My story name is KILL YOUR DREAMS
Anne lives the same day again and again, but in the end of day she gets killed by someone.Who’s the killer? Find out. It’s filled with drama and romance.
Genre- thriller
Author- Anna
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link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4905142231891968

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Hey there! :slight_smile:

I’d love it if you check my story and give me your feedback :blush:

Title: Different Worlds
Author: dkr_episodes
Genre: Rom-Com
Description: That sassy mouth of yours, puts you in more trouble than you thought. Especially since Gabe Milinghton, a sexy jerk, has set his eyes on you. This ain’t gonna be good, honey.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5829240774459392

Thank youuuuu :blush:

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Title: The Nation D: Moon Eyes
Author: P MarroquΓ­n
Genre: Fantasy/Mystery
Style: Limelight
Number of episodes: 8 (ongoing)
Description: You run away from one place to another… Where’s your new destination? And what dark secrets does it hide? Will you finally find answers to your past?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6435647390351360

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Thank you so, SO much!! :grin::purple_heart:

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Thank you :heart:

Story Name: The Godmothers’ Heir
Description: A year ago a tragic shooting and two gang members try capturing you. Now a year later it’s your turn to find out why, but how simple is that for two teens still in highschool?

Genre: Action/Adventure
Sub-Genres: Mystery, Thriller, Drama, Romance
Some tags: CC, Choices,Trailblazer, Cliche-Breaker,

Instagram : @lee.lee_26 Link:https://www.instagram.com/lee.lee_26/?hl=en
Leave a follow :wink:

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6065730015199232

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I’d like you to review my story!:heart:
It’s called β€œIdentical”.
Author’s name: The Sisters
Story Type : Ink
Genre: Drama
Description: When you find someone who looks identically like you, your life is turned upside down! A story of love and drama is waiting for you to check it out!

This is the cover:

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This is mine
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I will find you

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Hey!
I would really appreciate if you could take review my story. It is my very first one on Episode so I am really excited about getting feedback to make my story better.

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique

Extra comment: I have only published the first episode to get first impression feedback. There is no description or cover - I will add everything later when I know if the story is worthy continuing or if I need to make any major changes. I believe that the first chapter is the most important one so I want to make it perfect.

Thank you!

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Title: God’s Daughter
Episodes: 3
Description: War of the ages, lost hope, missing people is there room for love in a world of evil and good. Especially for God’s daughter and satans son
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Genre: Fantasy

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Hello~ I would love for somebody to review my story!
Please please check out my story!
It would mean the world to me cry emoji
Please Please <3 xoxo
Title: Opposite in Harmony
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure
Episodes: 4 right now, still going!
Description: Aimie is the princess of all angels but will she sacrifice everything, including her family to stand up for what is right? Or will she stand by her family’s side and never find true love? Her fate will be decided by YOU! <3
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Here’s the link
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5322669636845568

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HI! Thats awesome! working on my first story and about to publish. would be great if you could look at it :):smiley: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5627899985395712