I started writing this story in 2016. I stopped after I had my daughter in 2017. But I’ve jumped back on the bandwagon and I’ve opted to finish this story. I’ve finished the next Episode but have to wait for a background. So in the mean time I’ve opted to come back on here and ask for some guidance, I’d like a take on the first like 4 Episodes as I’m not sure if they’re a bit slow in dialogue, my writing style has changed a lot in 2 years so I’m not sure if these episodes need a lot of help or not. As come Episode 5 things tend to ramp up. It’s essentially a story of a Princess, who initially is supposed to choose a man for to court her and marry her, but the kingdom gets taken over and it becomes a quest like story where decisions you make help you gain or lose allies who help you along the way, there is a lot of drama and a bit of romance. But in short, I’d love if some people can take a look and give me some feedback so I can essentially revamp the previous episodes so they’re more enticing to readers.
Genre: Drama, Romance, Action