TITLE: REAL TIME With Jeff Meyers
GENRE: Informational Comedy/ Episode Tv Show
AUTHOR: Darius Q. Hunter
DESCRIPTION: This story takes you to a world where Episodes best writers get the credit they deserve. If you are a writer and you have more than 8 thousand reads, U could be nominated.
We have Celebrity Guest Appearances, Author of the day, Camera crew Traveling, Episode Updates, And World News. Try this unique, one of a kind story TODAY.
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Do you perhaps have a link to this story? It sounds interesting.
Ooh intriguing. My passes have run out but I will check out the first episode.
Right, so I checked out the first episode.
The overall premise is extremely interesting and I hope these suggestions may help you (first episode only seen):
I noticed each time a sound was used there was a transition, I recommend just having the sound there.
Perhaps, you could add a depiction of the authors and Jeff is engaging in conversation with the authors.
Also, maybe split up the dialogue into smaller bits and maybe add some comedic skits (so maybe Jeff backstage before going on - something like
MAKEUP GUY: Jeff, are you sure you want to go au naturale?
JEFF: Damn it, being middle aged is a freaking gift.
MAKEUP GUY: Uh Jeff, you’re 30…
Well that isn’t exactly funny lol but maybe showing bits of Jeff being offstage would be a great way to add a hint of a storyline to the story as well.)
However I find the premise intriguing.
Well its not like u cant request the r4r
Just search it on Episode
Thank you so much for the tips and i want u to kno that everything u said or suggested will eventually be on REAL TIME. But it takes much time to get things done. REAL TIME is no where near done and i look to make it as realistic as possible. Thanks any way
I will keep the backstage thing in mind
Ah thank you, for your explanation! I really appreciate the response and all the best!