Our Mini Reviews for the story Reality Behind Glasses by @Tsukino_94

_haruka's Review
The art scenes are really lovely, and the comedic moments with the MC are funny
the only errors I really noticed are grammatical errors, so that could be worth looking over 
Thank you to @_haruka for this short review.
JemU776's Review
My Short Review for Reality Behind Glasses:
I really loved your directing, it was nice, cool points system and I adored the cliffhanger at the end where he finds out the new student is actually a girl (nice art scene by the way) but I found the first episode a little too fast, in my opinion, it’s so much to take in. Don’t make credits optional, play through them and when you’re using text effects, don’t let there be a space between the last word and the period (.)
for this, it kinda implies they were in that classroom for the whole entire day.
!!! instead of !!
P.S I might have went a little over but yeah good job and you should do something nice for your proof-reader if you haven’t already (like make her a gift) because dang, she did an amazing job

Thank you to @JemU776 for this short review.
MelanieyM's Review
My review:
I already read the first episode when it came out, and it was good. Just I feel as if the male was kinda strange… but he is just suspicious of her.
Thank you to @MelanieyM for this short review.
Misslea1's Review
My review of Reality Behind Glasses.
I love your plot, dialogues are interesting with that little pinch of comedy.
What I will recommend fixing is your spot directing in a few scenes because characters look a little bit big when looking at the background features. An example is the scene in the Library where Layla seeks rest on the couch. To me she looked a little too big to fit in that chair. Scale and reduce her size a little bit.
Ps. Directing overall was good 
Thank you to @Misslea1 for this short review.
MissRuby's Review
The art scenes are stunning and I love how you portrayed the MC. I didn’t notice any directing errors so you did a great job! However, here are several grammatical errors so I suggest looking into that.
Thank you to @rubywrites for this short review.
Nessya's Review
I loved the funny moments between the MC and her kind of “stalker” LI. Amazing directing!
Just one speech bubble which covered Principal’s face a little when she bent over.
Thank you to @Nessya for this short review.
rachel.epii's Review
I absolutely love the idea of the plot and the way the 2 characters interact with each other.
I think, overall its great! It’s just a few grammar errors that need to be fixed.
Thank you to @rachel.epii for this short review.

