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Our Mini Reviews for the story Gold Leaf High by @MTB :icecream: :revolving_hearts:

Misslea1's Review

My review of Gold Leaf High by @MTB

Love the way you blended different racial backgrounds in one story and how you give the reader an insight into the lives of more than just one character, something we hardly see in stories on the app.

Will recommend you work more on zooms. Got a lil messed up in a few scenes.

Thank you to @Misslea1 for this short review.

MissRuby's Review

My review of Gold Leaf High :revolving_hearts:

I love the plot and I found no directing mistakes. However, I noticed several errors such as characters talking without doing animations, messed up zooms, and grammatical errors. I also think that the first episode wasnโ€™t very interesting. I suggest making more happen so readers will be more intrigued to continue the story.

Thank you to @rubywrites for this short review.

Nessya's Review

Gold Leaf High

I liked the diversity and the several insights on the characters lives. I found refreshing scholarship students being proud of it and hanging out with others.
Cute intro, but there was a strange zoom in one of the characters, I believe itโ€™s the one before Farrah. There were other zoom issues like when Beverly coughed and she bumped in Will.

Thank you to @Nessya for this short review.

rachel.epii's Review

Review of Gold Leaf High

I love the introductions to the character, particularly when the story has a flashback for a certain character. The only other thing I noticed is just one or two grammar errors and the panning and zooming simultaneously (it looks a bit awkward). Otherwise, itโ€™s a great story overall, I enjoyed it (:

Thank you to @rachel.epii for this short review.

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