Our Short Reviews for the story Sentimental Heartache by @jessy.writes 
JemU776's Review
My Review for Sentimental Heartache:
One thing I truly adored about your story is the music. I found you picked the right music selections in each scene as they set the mood for how the scene will play.
For example, in this scene, as Arianna cries, there is sad music playing behind her and it helps to reinforce how she is feeling. The text effects were also cool.
One thing I recommend to fix and go over is speechbubble placement. It was mostly nice from what I’ve read so far but there were some slip ups.
For example, in this scene, Alana is talking but the tail of the bubble comes from Josh’s mouth which makes it seem like he’s the person talking when actually he’s not, it’s her. So, the tail of the speechbubble should be coming from her direction as she is the one that is talking. Also when Alana and Arianna talk at the bus stop and Arianna gives her number, zoom in on them so the attention is on them (with your current zoom, we see lots of empty space with no activity except rain falling). Another thing! Three dots (…) instead of two (…)
Anyways, good job writer 
Thank you to @JemU776 for this short review.
MissRuby's Review
My review of Sentimental Heartache by @jessy.writes 
I really liked the narration and storyline. I absolutely love how you explained what the MC was feeling in such a beautiful and poetic way. The directing was pretty good, the only errors I found were some overlays appearing late.
Thank you to @rubywrites for this short review.
Nessya's Review
Sentimental Heartache
I usually don’t like music always playing but the way you change it really compliments the story and helps connect to Arianna’s feelings.
Not giving away too much, when we can understand that Arianna is going through something, is really smart, it leaves people curious, willing to understand the puzzle before them.
You really did a great job, we can feel Arianna’s struggles in things that we often take for granted.
Nice work with zooms. 
First scene speech bubbles on Arianna’s face.
Bus stop, when Alana’s boyfriend kisses her goodbye, he’s one or more layer above hers.
The same scene the speech bubbles are in Alana when is Arianna talking.
Bakery, guy’s speech bubbles are on Arianna.
The cotton candy machine shifted positions in the scene, it was fast but it happened.
Thank you to @Nessya for this short review.
rachel.epii's Review
Review of Sentimental Heartache
I really love how you’ve described Arianna’s feelings in most of the scenes, particularly when she bumped into her ex. The only thing I noticed was that there weren’t any overlays over background characters (so they were walking over obstacles). It’s a pretty great story so far!
Thank you to @rachel.epii for this short review.