Our Short Reviews for the story Hannah Miler’s Mystery by @remone 
Jessy.writes' Review
My review of Hannah Miler’s Mystery:
I wish that there was more context and it didn’t get straight to Hannah’s death. Spelling/grammar and spot directing can be fixed. For example, at the crime scene, characters are appearing on the screen. I liked the funeral scene a lot, but I wish I could’ve been more connected to Hannah before her death, it sort of just happened.
Thank you to @jessy.writes for this short review.
lowkeyFrosty's Review
I loved the story, but it could be honestly better. I feel like if you added more details this story would have a better chance of getting out there. The directing is mediocre and you have characters on and off-screen which I suggest having a proofreader checking that out for you. Hanna’s death seemed so sudden and if u added more context clues to help us understand Hanna as a person it would be better.
Thank you to @xetic for this short review.
Misslea1's Review
My review of Hannah Miller’s Mystery:
I love your plot because it’s very intriguing. I especially can’t wait to know the relationship between Hannah and Ser 
.
What I recommend fixing is grammar, pay attention to spot directing and zooms.
Thank you to @Misslea1 for this short review.
Nessya's Review
Hannah Miler’s Mystery:
Nice start, I really believed that Hannah could escape when she ran and was able to unlock the door then she was caught.
I really liked the bus scene, it looked like it was moving, nice job!
Awesome job with the zooms in Ser’s appearance, I liked the part where we couldn’t see her face, it gave the right feeling.
At the start of the episode we have a day BG then changes abruptly to a night.
Also after running, the character changes to a type of walking that doesn’t match her urgency.
In the jungle, after she walks looking sad/worried she stays idle, which again doesn’t match what you are trying to portray.
Strange change of BG, instead of fainting on the trailler, it passes through the exterior of the abandoned house.
Some layer issues on the trailler crime scene, the caution tape is on top of the first policeman at the start, then the second officer appears then the third, so I believe you’re using @ instead of &, when you use the first, the action happens after the previous action is finished while the latter makes everything happen at the same time.
I believe Dara.Amarie has an explanation thread for this.
Sometimes when officer Jessa is talking the other officer’s mouth is still moving from the previous talking animation.
The overlays are not appearing on the intended position at the start of the scene it happened with the bus and with the coffin.
Thank you to @Nessya for this short review.