Hey! This is where you can get your story reviewed by me. The review will be about what I think about your story and please note that it will be my own opinion and other people will think differently. I will read one chapter and if I like it as well as if I have enough passes I will read more. You can also review my story called Back to back and tell me what you think but you don’t have to. xx
Rules:
Don’t rush me, I will do it in my own time.
If you don’t fill in the form I won’t review your story.
If you are not happy with the review I have give you don’t be rude, just PM me.
How I will review your story:
The review will be based on the first impression, the directing, the plot, the characters and the speech. I will then give you a score out of 10 for each thing. Remember this is only my opinion and other people might not feel the same.
Form: e.g. Title: Back to back Author: Hamnah.episode Style: Limelight Genre: Action/Romance Amount of chapters you want reviewed: 1 Description: The mask. Who is she? Will you decide to find out, will you choose to let her go? You’re the best spy for your Dads agency. But along comes Jay. He stole your spot. You, his heart. Link:Optional Cover:
@TLdax913 Hey, while you’re waiting do want to do a quick review of my story back to back so I know what you think? Just PM me or say what you think on the thread.
The Title: Dirty Little Secret Author Name : Anongirl Genre: Drama Description : Briella Hart, a native Californian new girl in town, finds herself stuck in detention after crossing paths with hall monitor, Grayson Sanders. It’s time for payback! Episodes : 5 Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833300720615424 Cover :
Thanks so much! Title: Compulsion Author: Aimee.A Style: INK Genre: Comedy Amount of chapters: 3 however it isn’t completely finished yet! Description Zyro Morte is sent on death row. He’s given the chance to extend his time after the FBI need him for a mission. Simple? One problem, he has to jeopardize his soulmates family!? Cover: Not made yet! Linkhttp://episodeinteractive.com/s/6725446713540608
Hi,
I would love a review
Tittle: I made the devil cry
Author: Šebule
Style: LL
Genre: Fantasy
3 chapters
Description: There’s war. You’re the soldier, can you manage to save your kingdom from darkness and fight with your fate?
Choices matter.
Sorry I have terrible data connection, my coover won’t load, I will try it in a while. Thanks!
i would love a review if you don’t mind! thank you so much!
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane Author: Marshmallow O. Style: Limelight Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller) Amount I want reviewed?: I would love for you to read all 6 and give me feedback on them, but if you get bored you can stop reading whenever you want. Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Full CC, Choices Matter, Point System, Advanced Directing, 2 LI!
Here’s your review, @Daddyissues hope I was helpful x
Review
The cover wouldn’t attract my attention but the larger cover is really nice. The description makes me want to read on and it doesn’t sound like a cliche story.
The intro is really interesting and it makes me want to read on.
The main character seems really funny.
You might want to check some of the speech near the start, it doesn’t really make sense.
When she first goes to her new school you zoomed in a bit too much so some of the speech was cut of. Apart from that the directing is pretty good.
I like how you included someone with a hijab and made sure they dressed modestly, your story seems to have quite a lot of diversity.
The scene when she meets Grayson is really funny.
You made me really like the main character and her personality and that’s great!
The ending made me want to read on so much but I thought I should give you your review first x
Overall the story is really funny and I might of laughed out loud in some scenes but the grammar doesn’t really make sense. That’s fine though as there are lots of proof readers on episode who can help you with that.
This story is a 7/10
Here’s your review, @Aims1141 hope I was helpful x
Summary
The description is really good and I want to read the story now!
You don’t need to talk to the reader about the customisation or thanking them for reading, they just want to read the story.
The first few sentences “7 days until I die” I want to know why!
Soo good so far.
This is not your first episode right? It’s really interesting… In a good way.
Wow you are an evil author, why would you give me a choice like that? I thought I did something wrong but no… You locked it
Timed choice yay!
Wow she’s a badass.
This directing is great.
The plot is really intriguing and it’s really funny as well
Overall there are a few directing mistakes but he plot is great and the characters seem to have a lot of personality, I would want to read the next chapter but you might want something to do with the plot happen. xx
This story is a 9/10
Title : Take My Heart Episode Author : Jiya Genre : Romance Style : Ink Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4602924031868928 Description : Shawn visits NY to get away from his childhood love. But what happens when he meets an ordinary girl? Will she help him unite with his love or show him what real love is? Cover :