Here’s your review, @Aims1141 hope I was helpful x
Summary
- The description is really good and I want to read the story now!
- You don’t need to talk to the reader about the customisation or thanking them for reading, they just want to read the story.
- The first few sentences “7 days until I die”
I want to know why! 
- Soo good so far.
- This is not your first episode right? It’s really interesting… In a good way.
- Wow you are an evil author, why would you give me a choice like that? I thought I did something wrong but no… You locked it
- Timed choice yay!
- Wow she’s a badass.
- This directing is great.
- The plot is really intriguing and it’s really funny as well
- Overall there are a few directing mistakes but he plot is great and the characters seem to have a lot of personality, I would want to read the next chapter but you might want something to do with the plot happen. xx
This story is a 9/10