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I just got a new phone and I’m finally downloading the app again after a few months, so I’d like to read YOUR stories and I’ll write a (most likely) fanfiction sized review :blob_hearts: Please reccomend me your stories and I’ll come back with tips, critique and more. Can’t wait to start reading XOXO Thanks!

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Could you review my story, O Son Where Art Thou:

Title O Son Where Art Thou

Description You lose your son by unjust means and your son is now with a man you despise. Can you rightfully reclaim your son? Find out in this striking drama. Male MC, choices matter, and two endings.

Genre Drama

Style Limelight

No. of episodes 14 (including bonus episode)

Instagram @brendan.writes

Here’s the link:

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My story is The Curse of St Clair. It’s a story about a witch discovering her past and falls in love with a vampire.

It’s a forbidden lovers story and a huge focus on finding yourself🥰

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Hey Goth,

Thank you for this thread. Please, read my stories ‘Colo(u)ring the Rainbow’ (LL), ’Cat Paws And Wolf Claws’, ‘Little Star’ (LL), ‘For HIS Sake’ (LL), ‘Double Trouble Love’ (INK, coming out soon) and/or ‘The Runaway Groom’ LL and INK.

Number 1 (Not published yet!!):

I will show the cover when it’s done!!!

Title: Double Trouble Love

Author: AngelWings

Instagram: @angelwings_1983

Genre: LGBTQ

Style: INK

Description: You wake up in the past, where the love of your life dislikes you. And past you is in the present. Oh, and your crush is your double. Male MC, Male LI, CC char reader #DTLINK

Episodes: 3 (4 is following soon).

Number 2:

Cover Colo(u)ring the Rainbow:

Title: Colo(u)ring the Rainbow

Author: AngelWings

Instagram: @angelwings_1983

Genre: LGBTQ

Style: LL

Episodes: 3 (in revamp and episode 4 is following soon!!)

Link Colo(u)ring the Rainbow:

Description: You get in a car-accident. A kid is a witness. What happens if a judge sentence you to take care of the kid until his/her parent is out of coma? #CTR M/F MC and M/F LI CC, gender choices for the kid, choices.

Number 3:

Cover Cat Paws And Wolf Claws:

Title: ‘Cat Paws And Wolf Claws’

Author: AngelWings

Instagram: @angelwings_1983

Genre: Fantasy

Style: LL

Episodes: 19 (More are following!!)

Link Cat Paws, Wolf Claws:

Description: You, a 49 year old female werecat, find an 9 year old orphan at your doorstep. What secrets will unfold, when you decide to take care of him??? #CPAWC No CC, Fantasy, Romance, choices… Female MC Male LI

Number 4:

:point_right: :point_right: 8 episodes, more are following:

Links The Runaway Groom:

Cover The Runaway Groom:

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Description: You, a bi-male, runs away the 15th time at the aisle. What are you going to do if number 16 is the first one that ran away from you?? #TRGLL #TRGINK Male MC, Male LI, comedy, little bit of mafia and LGBTQ+

Number 5:

:point_right: :point_right: And now my pride, my baby:

Title: ‘For HIS Sake’

Author: AngelWings

Instagram: @angelwings_1983

Genre: LGBTQ+

Style: LL

Episodes: 26 (More are following!!)

Description: After a tragedy you decide to turn your life upside down. You quit your job and has one friend left. That changes when you meet him… Your LI…

:wink: #FHS Male MC, Male LI CC, LGBTQ+

Link:

Cover:

Small cover FHS

Number 6:

Link Little Star:

Cover Little Star:

By AngelWings

Description: Your husband and you are trying to get children for years… finally she’s there… but she’s born dead… #LSLL CC, Choices, 1 LI.

For a final special revamp (So, better not read it. :wink: )

  • Little Star INK (After revamp it’s complete);

  • The Door Is Open LL (After revamp it’s complete);

  • The Door Is Open INK (After revamp it’s complete);

  • The Search of Thomas f*ing White (LL) (Still continues after revamp…);

  • Bounded Minds (INK) (Still continues after revamp…);

  • Bounded Minds (LL) (Still continues after revamp…).

Happy reading and stay safe!!

Love A-W

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Hiii, I would love if you could give me feedback on my new story :sparkling_heart:
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Title: Beyond Life
Genre: Sci-Fi
Description: A glitch in the system causes two strangers to realize that the world isn’t what they thought it was. Together, they try to discover the truth, and what’s real.
Chapters: 5 (6 comes out later today)
Link: Beyond Life link :star_struck:
Thank you :heart_hands:

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Any choices and customise?

There are choices but no CC :hugs:

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:sob:okidoki will try tho im still looking for the lost book of mine lol just hope someone can tell me

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Sorry I don’t know what story you’re talking about but maybe if you create a new topic more people can help you :heart_hands:

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Heyyy!!!
One of you supporters is here : )
This was my Fabled contest story.

:fire: Story Title:
6 Elementals: The Past

:fire: Genre:
Fantasy

:fire: Description:
6 Elementals could save Erendor. But what if it’s not that easy?
Switching to the dark side, breaking rules, and making sacrifices.
Friendship, love, and unity vanish. 1 Li

Published: 5 episodes

:fire: Link: 6 Elementals: The Past

Cover by @/v.h_episode

PLAYLIST!!:heart_eyes:

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This is called The Pleasure Room by Miru

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Im not quiet sure about that coz they aren’t sexually untill almost the end

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Hi!! Here’s my latest story if you’d like to check it out!!


A Vegas Dare Affair

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Read episode 1! OH MY GOD I MISS MY SON AND I LOVE THE MOVIE O BROTHER WHERE ART THOU

(I am leaving a review on your wonderful story ASAP!)

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Welcome to the forums, Chezzy! May your time here be fantastic and your search fruitful!

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This offers a great opportunity to immerse yourself in community stories and support authors. I’d love to present my story, which I’ve written over the course of four years. Feedback would be greatly appreciated! :smiling_face:

Title: Bloodline
Link: Episode Writer Portal
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 47, ongoing
Instagram: @episode._.abby
Description: In search of family ties, Arryawn enters a dangerous world, where secrets, romance, and revenge collide. Her choices will either save her or seal her fate.

Step into the heart of Maracay alongside Arryawn, a 23-year-old in search of her family’s hidden legacy. What begins as a quest for roots takes an unexpected turn when she’s mistaken for a member of a notorious gang.
Buckle up for a journey filled with secrets, romance, and a thirst for justice. Guided by the enigmatic Mateo, Arryawn must navigate a world where loyalties shift, trust is a fragile commodity, and danger lurks in every shadow. Amidst the chaos, a passionate romance ignites, but can it withstand the relentless pursuit of chaos?
As Arryawn peels back the layers of her family’s past, she unearths a legacy that’s anything but ordinary. The truth surrounding her grandfather’s mysterious death remains a well-guarded secret, and the choices she makes will either lead to redemption or plunge her into the heart of darkness.

With a strong a female lead at its center, this narrative invites you to unravel a web of secrets, betrayals, and revelations, all brought to life through art scenes. The characters can be customized, while for those seeking a deeper exploration, mature scenes are available on Patreon, (for 18+ ONLY), adding depth and nuance to the plot.

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The Pleasure Room isn’t about s*x it’s about a group of people who get hired to help people so she was hired to live in their house

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@Goth
Thank you for doing this

Who’s ready?

:rotating_light:TITLE The Last Witness

:rotating_light:Genre: Mystery

:rotating_light:Description: After a devastating fight, You lose your best friend. Now a relentless killer seeks to frame you. Can you expose the true murderer in Time? The clock is ticking…

2LI,NO\CC,CM.

:rotating_light:2LI

:rotating_light:Limited CC

:rotating_light:Choices

:rotating_light:Tappable Mini games/ Minigmes

:rotating_light:No point system

:rotating_light:Advance directing

:rotating_light:Bonus content

:rotating_light:Romance/None Romance

:rotating_light:Three endings

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I’d be happy if you review mine

Story Title : STOLEN DESIRES

Story Description : In a thrilling twist, high-profile thief Leon targets Salma’s company, but a mistake leads to her getting kidnapped. Will he eliminate her or fall for her irresistible charm?

Genre : Dark Romance/ Drama/ Action/ Thriller

Trope : Enemies to lovers, Forced Proximity

Instagram : @aquawrites4

Chapters Available : 3 episodes and more coming soon

Link to Story : STOLEN DESIRES

:spades:FULL CC
:spades:MALE MC
:spades:FEMALE Li
:spades:ART SCENES
:spades:ADVANCED DIRECTING
:spades:ONE ENDING
:spades:BONUS SCENES

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I just published mine, if you’d like to check it out.

Thank you in advance for your time & support.

:black_heart: Title : The Shadow Witch

:black_heart: Genre : Fantasy

:black_heart: Episodes : 4 & on-going!

:black_heart: Style : Limelight

:black_heart: Description : “Raven is thrown into a world of Witchcraft, Vampires, & Wolf-Shifters once she discovers she is adopted. Love, family, and adventure awaits her — but trouble awaits her, too.”

:black_heart: Character Customization & Choices

:black_heart: Story Link:

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