URGENT: Need beta read for feedback!

Hey! I need someone to beta read the first few lines of my first chapter for directing mistakes and ideas! I’m trying to develop a solid plot for my story and need some ideas! Anyone who is willing to look over what I have so far and share ideas and fix grammar or directing mistakes is greatly appreciated. Pm me if interested!

I would love to read it!

Okay! I’ll pm you :slight_smile:

id love to read it

dm if interested

Finished the first chapter, so a little bump :slight_smile: