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Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 5
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
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  • Title Scars
  • Author name inxmyxeyes
  • Description The past created who Eve is right now. Life never goes easy on her. that’s why she became so ruthless to anyone she’s ever met.
  • Episodes number 3

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I’m not allowed to get into the script editing part, you need to send the story link

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Title: Adventurous: Valour
Author name: TheGreenNebula
Description: You got released from prison after your reign as a super-villain, what will happen when you’re given a scholarship to a mysterious university that’s swarming with heroes? CC, LGBT
Episodes Number: 3 (More Episodes Coming Soon)

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Wow your story is actually really good, I really enjoy reading it, the whole idea is great
I don’t have really have any Remarks :joy:
But you should update your CC temples, you can use those- Dara’s temples

And that’s it actually :sweat_smile::sweat_smile:

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Title: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author name: Jannah Jackson
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/ (6 or 7)
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure

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Thanks! I’ll have a look at it :slight_smile:

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I have recently revamped. I would love some review about it. I hope I am not bothering you. I really hope you can do it like the previous one. I have made some things clear and the episodes are longer that before.

  • Title: Black hearts Golden desires
  • Author: Madhu
  • Chapters: 6
  • Description: Nand , a sorcerer princess of Solataria has two beautiful loving sisters, her other two halves. But what will happen if it becomes the vice versa and an old enemy arises back for revenge? Will Nand be able to overcome it ? Or will she fail?

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•Title Rock Your Socks Off
•Author name Isaiah H
•Description Lies,Love, Lust, Gangs and Death! People may think the dancing industry is simple… But what happens when it can get you killed?
•Episodes number 6

My Cover :slightly_smiling_face:

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First of all, i really don’t think that the character should talk to the player cause the character is basically THE player
And I think you took that whole weirdo thing a little too far :sweat_smile:
I don’t mean to insult anybody, I’m so sorry if I did :sweat:
I just think that the plot is really good but you need to give the character personality that everyone is comfortable with since there are many different readers :blush:

Thanks for the advice. I understand that she acts “weird.” However, I want to create an unique character. I want her to be “different.”

Your idea is really good
I love the way you writing!
But something bother me in there :sweat_smile:
I guess the background was just with way too much things and it was hard to focus on the character :woman_shrugging:
Plus, i suggest you to introduce all the players together and then say something about every one of them in separate scenes :upside_down_face:
Otherwise, everything is great :grin:

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Yes, of course
I’m just saying…
But actually the thing that bother me the most is the talking to the player :sweat_smile:
But it’s really great that you are trying to create something different :upside_down_face:

I’m not mad :joy:. You are entitled to say your opinion;

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Thank you very much.

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i would love a review! thank you so much! :star_struck::heart:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author Name: Marshmallow O.
Summary: Its a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…
Episodes: 6

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Hi, I would love a review if you don’t mind please!

Title- Hope Lost
Author- Miss S.B
Description- Life has never been easy for Sofia but this one event will change her life forever. Will hope find its way back to her…
Genre- Drama

Thank you!

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I would love a review

Title: The Star Necklace

Author: Mayah

Style : ink

Episodes number: 7 more coming soon

Genere: Drama

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

Link :

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Title : Take My Heart
Episode Author : Jiya
Genre : Romance
Style : Ink
Link :
Description : Shawn visits NY to get away from his childhood love. But what happens when he meets an ordinary girl? Will she help him unite with his love or show him what real love is?
Cover :
Episodes : 1 (more to come)

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