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I would really appreciate if you would check out my story :grin::grin:
My story
Title : The Cartels daughter
Author : Kylie menr
Episodes : 5 (Ongoing)
Genre : Romance
Style : inK
Description : Damien Cruz Has His Eyes On You And Resisting The Temptation Is Punishing For You, Especially When He’s Threatening Your Father.
Instagram ; Kyliemenr.episode
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I will read your story. IF you read mine 1st.
**You will have to send me screenshoot in order for me to read your story **
After that, i will read your story too and send screenshoot to u

This is my story, let me know … …if you want to R4R,

Story Title: Do i belong to him ?
Author: Pearl (me)
Genre: Drama Mystery
Style: Limelight
Completed? No (ongoing)
Customization: yes

Description: This story tells about you will meet with alumni.

This alumni has a background that is very difficult to explain.

However,you will get obstacles. And so many mystery inside.

What’s that? Let’s read…

ps: I’m looking to grow my supports ( readers), I would love to reach 1k reads by the end of this year. Please leave feedback/fanmail if you read my story,:hugs: really appreciate it:hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:


The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Do I Belong To Him? (Ep no.5 out)

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The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Do I Belong To Him?

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

ps: I’m looking to grow my supports ( readers), Please leave feedback/fanmail if you read my story, :hugs: really appreciate it:hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:

if u interesting, please reply
r u already read my story? sent screenshoot to me

Hey, I would love a review.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.

Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter



Title : To the Night
Author: Megan Beard
Genre : Comedy
Style : INK
Description : Megan and her group of friends have a crazy night out on the town. Follow Megan and her friends trying to recall the events of last night. Completely Revamped .
Episodes : 9 (On Going)
All Criticism Welcome!
Instagram: megan12.episode
Story Link:

Character personality: I really like Ophelia’s personality All the things that’s happened to her she’s still positive which I love. I also already like Grey and Ophelia’s relationship between each other even though they just met! You didn’t rush anything. Which I also like. 5/5

Dialogue: at the start there wasn’t a lot of dialogue but that’s ok the narration helped me imagine all the things Ophelia’s been through. You’ve done the dialogue very well! 5/5

Directing: The directing again wasn’t the best but it was good! Try adding more overlays because the story kinda feels plain with out it. Other than that there was nothing wrong with it. 3/5

Plot: I’ve never really read a book about this but I’m actually intrigued about your story and it’s not like another cliche romance story! :slight_smile: 4/5

Overall score: 17/20

I’ve added your story to my favourites! :slight_smile: I’m looking forward for more episodes from the story In The future

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Characters personality: I don’t really get why Adrian and Adam hate each other so much? Could you maybe explain more why they hate each other so much because in the story it can be confusing of why they have a feud. Both of their personalities are just filled with anger which isn’t very pleasing, but that’s ok.2/5

Dialogue: If I’m being honest, I feel like the dialogue is unrealistic like in the cafeteria scene every one was just angry at each other and it just got boring read. 2/5 but I admire you tried to add suspense.

Directing: You used spot directing which is good. But when the boys in the back popped up in the screen at the start which is annoying. And When Adam and that other guy was sitting in class they was too small for the chair try to make them bigger please. 2/5

Plot: I’m kinda lost on the plot but you tried which is good. Personally there’s too much drama in the story I was lost in the first episode. But your story is still good :slight_smile: 2/5

Overall score:8/20

Character personality: so far I already know Cassidy and Denver like each other a lot. But I don’t really know about each other separately yet ya know? Like all I know is that they love each other that’s it. 3/5

Dialogue: If I’m being honest I feel like the first episode is moving to fast like they literally met each other and they was already confessing their love to each other in the first episode and they moved in the first episode. I get it was like a few weeks later but try to separate it out don’t cramp it in one. Sorry but it was just too unrelistic :confused: 3/5

Directing: You actually have good directing skills, I really liked the art scene and the overlays used in the story which made it better. 4/5

Plot: Your plot is original but you haven’t really showed it in a intriguing way, but i know your story has potential, just slow down because I felt like everything was going to fast. 4/5

Overall score:14/20

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Thank you for your feedback! :two_hearts: I’ll just say it’s a story about soul mates. & Everything happens for a reason, everything you brought up is spread out. (& lol no she didn’t move in with him) Parts of this story is a play on my life, so it’s not unrealistic.

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Here’s mine. :wink:

Story Title: XENA PIERCE
Author: sophiesophilatte
Story Genre: ACTION
Style: Limelight
Story Description:
An HEIRESS, a DAUGHTER, a GIRL who seeks answers–guide XENA KATSUMI PIERCE as she fights in order to save her mother. Will she make it through? Her SURVIVAL depends on YOU. (CM)

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Thank you!

Title - Tainted Souls.
Genre - Fantasy
Style - INK
Description - Despised by everybody around her, Ella just doesn’t feel good enough. Be careful what you wish for…You never know WHO or WHAT could be listening… CC
Episodes - 7 (On Going)
Story Link -


Also my other story!
Title - Hidden Behind Lies!
Genre - Action/Drama
Style - Ink
Description - Faces from the past return, Forgotten memories remembered, What happens when you find out you have a empire waiting for you? Will it make you weak? Let’s hope not!
Episodes - 20 (On going)
Link -


Thank you for the review!!!

In the episode, it was explained that Adrian almost expose them to their old school., and then down a couple episodes it shows why Adam hates him more. But thank you!

Thank you so much! This really motivates me to write more :slight_smile:

Character personality: So for I know that the Mc is one of those curious worried main characters which I love. I also like how rudo and the mc is so caring towards jindara so that’s cute. 4/5

Dialogue: at the start I really liked the dialogue but after jindara stormed out the room I felt like the dialogue was dragging a bit you know? Like Rudo was talking to the MC for like too long for me. But other than that I loved the dialogue. 3/5

Directing: I like the text at the start of the story and how I had to tap the screen to see the next text. That must have took long to direct. Your directing is actually really good there was no errors. 4/5

Plot: although I got a little lost towards the end I think your plot is really unique! Your story has potential! :slight_smile: 4/5

Overall score: 15/20

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Character personality: So far so good jade has a very open minded personality which I like in a main character she doesn’t let anyone in her way for example max. I would give you a 4/5 for character personality

Dialogue: The dialogue is good and all it’s just that max is so ruthless to jade over a cupcake which was kinda weird? Lol but for some reason I kinda found it funny so most of the dialogue was decent there was no errors. 3/5

Directing: I loved the art scenes it really enhanced the for me as the reader. Just be sure to check the layers because there was a scene where max walked under jade and Anne. Lol but 3/5 for directing.

Plot: I really like your plot although I have read lots of stories with the similar plot you showed it in a interesting way for me as the reader 3/5 for plot

Overall score: 13/20


Character personality: I like Sarah and Sahar’s personality it’s like they’re literally twins who are best friends which I really like about your story. 3/5 on character personality

Dialogue: Some of the dialogue was intresting BUT there was a lot of grammar mistakes like there was no periods at the end of sentences and you kept mixing up “your” with “you’re” which was annoying. But aside that I will give you a 4/5 for dialogue

Directing: Again, The directing wasn’t the best but it was good, you used sport directing and zooms which makes the story better. Try to add more overlays 4/5 for directing.

Plot: I’m kinda lost on the plot but I was kinda getting it in the middle of the episode when Sahar and Sarah was at that house to kill that man. Other than that your plot is really unique! 4/5 for plot.

Overall score: 15/20

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Story Title: Forgotten
Author Name: Nii07
Style: INK
Genre: Mystery
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Story Link:

Thank you! i really appreciate it

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Story Title: The Episode House
Author: Samantha
Genre: Comedy
Style: Limelight
Completed? No
Customization: yes
Description: You and 14 other people are locked in a house for 100 days. One by one you vote each other off until one house guest remains. The winner recieves one million dollars!

Thank you for this thread! <3 I would love a review.
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED