Great plot, it was really straight forward. I love how you showed readers how each of them got there. Grammar and spelling errors did not occur. Overlays were great and transitions were really good too! I always really liked how you build the characters, as in showing a little bit of their own life!
Overall for Episode 1:5/5
Episode 2:
I really liked the point system you made. Definitely a great mystery story! Still no grammar or spelling mistakes! Really liked the way you showed Nadineโs life! I also really like the chemistry you built with Lincoln and Nadine too! A really good episode! Nice job!
Overall for Episode:5/5
Episode 3:
I really love how they all find each other and connect. Yet again another great episode! No grammar or spelling mistakes. Great job with continuing the plot too! This episode was also quite funny too, so I loved how you added that in. I really enjoyed reading the episode!
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