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hey there! i really like the story but i’d work on directing a bit more… maybe revamp it? thanks for sharing :black_heart:

literally!!!

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hey! i like the story but it’s too much for me so i didn’t finish the first chapter sorry. i love the directing though and don’t have much criticism for you :green_heart:

I commissioned it from dana_i_nana on Instagram! :slight_smile:

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What do you mean on directing?

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Too much?

The length? The amount of content? I dont know if I should be worried :sweat_smile: if ppl cant finish the first chapter. So far only you and another person but I guess it depends on taste on preferences.

But no worries. Thanks for the feedback still :slight_smile:

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yeah it was a good amount but it’s not a story for me at all ahah. it’s not that anything was wrong with it, it’s just very fast paced as in you get straight into it whereas i like kinda enjoy mystery/romance. good luck! :yellow_heart:

well a few characters popped up when they shouldn’t and personally i would sort that out.

Ah I see of course of course. Understand. Thank you still for reading :smiley:

It’s still a mystery though but more deep. No romance like the normal episode stories. It deals with real life issues like the poor, peasants, victims etc. Different class of people in different societies. The different races in Asia.

It’s inspired by Game of Thrones, Avatar: The Last Airbender (Cartoon version), Narnia and all that hehehe. So that’s why it’s slightly different from most episode stories. But no worries I respect your preference :smiley:

If you like later on, I’ll put it up on Youtube so you don’t need to tap just watch.

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Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368

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TITLE: My Kalona
GENRE: Fantasy
CHAPTER STATS: 5 chapters published
EXPECTED LENGTH: 15
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4559018983227392
DESCRIPTION: Naomi desperately tries to bond with her estranged father, but becomes the prisoner of a Native-American curse that threatens all. Will her choices lead to freedom or failure?
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Thanks for the thread! I would really apreciate your review :slightly_smiling_face:
Living like a star

@livgrace.episode
I have recently revamped. I would love some review about it.

  • Title: Black hearts Golden desires
  • Author: Madhu
  • Chapters: 6
  • Description: Nand , a sorcerer princess of Solataria has two beautiful loving sisters, her other two halves. But what will happen if it becomes the vice versa and an old enemy arises back for revenge? Will Nand be able to overcome it ? Or will she fail?
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Hi I would really like some feedback on my story please. It’s my first story and I’m kinda stuck on how to make it more interesting for people to read.

Your feedback is much appreciated!

Title- Hope Lost
Author- Miss S.B
Description- Life has never been easy for Sofia but this one event will change her life forever. Will hope find its way back to her…
Genre- Drama
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5589163051843584

Thank you!

Thank you so much for this thread xxx
Story Title: Taming Him CC
Author: UnknownSnowFlake
Genre: Romance and Action (also some Comedy and Drama)
Story Description: You just find out that you’ve been betrothed to a sexy yet callous billionaire. But there’s just one problem. You’re a vigilante, and he’s trying to kill you.
Story Style: Ink
Number of Chapters: 7 so far
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6155554812329984

Thank you for offering this! I have two stories, but you can just do one if you would like :slight_smile:

Title: Adventurous: Time Immune
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Title: Sorry, Wrong Number
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

Episode Author : Jiya
Genre : Romance
Style : Ink
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4602924031868928
Description : Shawn visits NY to get away from his childhood love. But what happens when he meets an ordinary girl? Will she help him unite with his love or show him what real love is?
Cover :
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Episodes : 1 (more to come)

Story name: MoonStar
Author: Mayalina
Genre: Fantasy/romance
style: Limelight
episodes: 5 (more coming!!)
description: You play as a girl called Michaela. She is an half elf half human girl who lives alone with her sister. But for some reason Michaela is being hunted by an evil elf group who are trying to kill her. Will she survive? And why do they want to kill her?
Instagram: mayalina.episode
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5505856963936256

Be 100% honest on my story please!! :slight_smile:

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