Want feedback? Look no further!


#1

Paste your story link here! :slight_smile:


#2

I am not gonna look further :hugs:
Here is my link:


Would love to listen your thoughts :wink:


#3

I just published a story. :heart:
Please read It and tell my what you think.

  • Name : JACKPOT
  • Genre : Mystery,Action,Romantic
  • Description : Your life changes when you inherit the number one casino from your gradpnfather.Will you save a casino or will you givi it to your brother. (CC) (Choice matters) Two endings.
    Episode 4 coming out very soom.

I think almost every person on this forum helped me with this story.Thank you for that.(At the end of epsode 2 you will see credits,find your name there.

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#4

Hey I would like a honest feedback :blush:
Title: Tears Between Smiles
Author: TessS
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink


Thank you :blush: :black_heart:


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Author: S_Unique
Title: The Four Horsemen
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384


#8

This is a fantasy story, filled with a plot I personally think is original and not the cliche stories you see a lot of in Episode. If you’re interested, I would love your feedback and what you think of my story! :hearts:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6524977897930752


#9

I would love to receive feedback!
Here’s my story:
Name: Girl of Deception
Author: IDONTKNOW
Genre: Adventure
Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s a selfish arrogant jerk. Little does she know that’s all about to change.CC in episode 6 choices matter



#10

Hello! I would love some feedback for my story. I’m new to making stories and this is my first. Thank you!

Title: Infected Souls
Author: Eli B.
Genre: Action
Description: It’s the apocalypse. Alex wants the best for his loved ones, but what about himself? As insanity lurks in his mind, so does it lurk among the very people putting Alex in danger.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6453391687155712

I hope you a weird sense of humor btw! :slight_smile:


#11

I would love to hear your feedback!
Here is the link of my story: Serendipity by Mar C


#12

Hey, @VictoriaRose! Thank you creating this thread! I’d love some feedback on my story. Here are my story details:

Title: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! :two_hearts:


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Title: DD: Some Sort of Love
Author: LameCast
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 2! Please don’t read 3. It’s being worked on still.
Description: Baby is determined to provide fun in the sun at Luna Resort! A cascade of characters have come to the island to make memories and maybe a few . . . mistakes?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6064098849980416
Instagram: lamecast.episode

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#15

Hey! I’ve created 2 stories so far, and I would love it if you’d check 'em out!! :heartbeat:

DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

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LINK:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5839144650932224

The Ember Moon Pack

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings

Genre: Fantasy

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912

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#16

Name: No changes after a year
Author: Teddy’s Dollhouse
Genre: Drama, romance, comedy
Description: Zen had a beautiful childhood until he was 10 years old with his father but after meeting a beautiful women who claims to be his true mother everything changes.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6385627538259968


#17

Hello @VictoriaRose I would like to receive a feedback, please. :blush:

This is my story.

Story title: Rewinded life.

Author name: Lia Lopez.

My instagram: lia_lopez_episode

Description:
What would you do if a galactic being gives you the power to go back and change situations that escapes from your hands?

Genre: Comedy, romance, life.

Episodes: 6 (Ongoing - Working on chapter 7.)

Link:


#19

Thanks x


#20

I see you have a lot of people asking for feedback…if you have a few minutes, would you consider giving me some help as well?

THE TOWER
Faced with sudden destitution, Daisy and her mother flee to live in the country, seeking shelter at the Grand Estate of her mother’s enigmatic ex-husband.

Planned multiple love interests and different endings based on choices! Choices aren’t always obvious.

This is my first story, and I’m stuck on how to end chapter one. Thank you so much!


#21