Hi! My name is Kana! I have been using episode for a long time but unfortunately I forgot my old account password and I had no choice to start a new one.
I have been seeing a lot of people trying to get reads and trying to promote their story. One of the things most users do is ask them to read their story so they can read theirs. In other words read4reads!
Well, now I want to change that. Over here you can promote your story and I will read it through. I will obviously give you back my feedback and if I think your story is awesome but does not have enough love I will probably spread the word and share your story to others.
And don’t worry it’s all for free. I’m just doing this as a community service to all the promising writers out there.
Please note that the feedback I give is all personal, another person might interpret it another way and if I don’t like sugar coating stuff so please know that some of the feedback I give might offend, but I will guarantee you it’s an very honest opinion. Also please be patient when I give you some feedback, I also have a life of my own. By the way, all the feedback I give will be sent through this forum, it’s easier for me this way.
Good luck and have fun coding!
PS. To those who just come here to get new stories to read I have a few suggestions for you! Don’t worry, these stories are already reviewed and I think they are worth the read!
God’s Among us
Description; Gods and demons are both after you as a war for the universe unfolds. When your true destiny is revealed will you be able to face it? And who will stand by your side when you do? My story will have art scenes. http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6609321009152000
Description: After living a boring and repetitive life, you’re offered an opportunity of a lifetime. You leave your family behind and take your best friend to New York to begin your new journey. But little do you know, someone has other plans for you. The plane crashes on an island you think is inhabited. Find out what happens when you discover the real reason behind the crash. https://episodeinteractive.com/s/6074594463645696
You can read my story if you want and share your feedback.
Story Name: SOLO
Description: When mysterious powers and an undeniable tragedy clash with destiny, will June be able to change the orbit of her fate?
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4645081272614912
Others: Limited CC. timed and premium choices matter.
I definitely welcome any feedback or critique! Bless you for doing this☺️
Title : Best Interest Style : Limelight Genre : Drama Description : After moving to a new town to get away from her narcissistic crazed ex-boyfriend, Jasmine sets out on a journey to find her own happiness. (Full CC) Story link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6237545781067776
Hi there girl! I have read the first chapter of your story and here’s my feedback!
Throughout the first chapter I have a few issues, the first is the way you make your characters sit. It’s very funny, they just slide down and it makes you very confused. I was thinking you could change it to the sitting action instead, that way other readers know the characters are sitting down instead of a glitch happening on the app.
The second was the starting. You had a girl come up and do the modeling thing and that’s fine but what’s confusing is you had a button saying ending chapter or something. Clearly nobody what’s to start a story by going to the end. What’s the point of playing a story then! Readers what to read a story because they want to go through it from the starting and gradually come to the end no matter how frustrating it is to not know the end. This is what captures the readers, makes them want to continue so they find out the ending.
Three is the main character. You started with the guy and gave him his point of view. Then you let us customize him and told us he was the love interest instead, not the main character. Clearly this is the most weirdest thing in the story. You started with someone else when you clearly said it centers on Cleo, the main character. To some this shows poor planning in the story. What I suggest is to delete the narrative part of the love interest and concentrate on the main character instead. Show how she starts the story, not the guy.
Besides that I think this is an excellent story. It has the drama, amazing coding and directing, the dialogues are easy to understand and you can understand the situation once you ignore the part where you give the love interest point of view.
This is all I have to say! Thanks for giving me your story to read and I hope this feedback helps you!
Description: Penny is in a dead end relationship with an emotionally unavailable guy. Luckily her best friend Mason is always there to be her emotional fluffer. The problem? He’s in love with her and she’s oblivious.
Title; Gods Among Us
Description; Gods and demons are both after you as a war for the universe unfolds. When your true destiny is revealed will you be able to face it? And who will stand by your side when you do? My story will have art scenes.
Greetings! Thanks for this thread. I’d love to hear any thoughts you have about my story.
Title: Eternal Oblivion Author: Silver Lady Genre: Fantasy primarily with some mystery, action, drama, romance, and just a hint of historical fiction thrown in from time to time (more so in later chapters). Style: Limelight Number of Episodes: Nine currently, more on the way. CC: Kinda. You can’t customize the main three characters (for story reasons), but there is a character for you to customize starting with chapter five. You won’t see much of her to start, but she becomes more important later in the plot. Description: Something ancient plots unseen in the darkness, and Amara must quickly uncover the mystery surrounding it. Otherwise, all will be lost. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6355100663873536 Covers:
Hey girl, Thank you so much for this thread! Here is my story, I would be really happy if you give me your personal opinion about it . Title : Life in Demby Author : Megz_episode Description : The new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME? Cover :
If you want to pm me your thoughts that’ll be great. Here’s my info:
Title: Swiping Right
Description: After Aubrey had left her ex boyfriend she decides to explore her sexuality. Doing so she meets Haruna, and her left changes drastically.
Additional notes: CC, choices matter.
Thank you for this thread! I would love it if you read my story! Could you PM me the feedback?
Title: Remember Me Author: Mila.episodes Genre: Fantasy but it’s a mix of drama and comedy too. Style: Ink Number of Episodes : 7 Description: When Dean bumps into his first love, she doesn’t remember who he is. Through a series of misunderstandings, flashbacks, and heartbreak, will Dean hold on or forget her too?
I’m going to pop mine in here too. I hope you enjoy it!
Title: Josephine (LL)
Episodes: 7 (more coming)
Description: Josephine catches her fiance in an affair. After the betrayal, she struggles to piece her life back together and find her balance…and love again. Http://www.instagram.com/Matilda.episode.com