Want some feedback? Need new Stories? Promote your story here!

Hi! My name is Kana! I have been using episode for a long time but unfortunately I forgot my old account password and I had no choice to start a new one.

I have been seeing a lot of people trying to get reads and trying to promote their story. One of the things most users do is ask them to read their story so they can read theirs. In other words read4reads!

Well, now I want to change that. Over here you can promote your story and I will read it through. I will obviously give you back my feedback and if I think your story is awesome but does not have enough love I will probably spread the word and share your story to others.

And don’t worry it’s all for free. I’m just doing this as a community service to all the promising writers out there.

Please note that the feedback I give is all personal, another person might interpret it another way and if I don’t like sugar coating stuff so please know that some of the feedback I give might offend, but I will guarantee you it’s an very honest opinion. Also please be patient when I give you some feedback, I also have a life of my own. By the way, all the feedback I give will be sent through this forum, it’s easier for me this way.

Good luck and have fun coding!

Story Recommendations!

PS. To those who just come here to get new stories to read I have a few suggestions for you! Don’t worry, these stories are already reviewed and I think they are worth the read!

Fantasy
  1. Solo
    Author: @Bithi
    Description: When mysterious powers and an undeniable tragedy clash with destiny, will June be able to change the orbit of her fate?
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4645081272614912

  2. Love From Another Realm
    Author: @TSTaylor
    Description: Big city girl thinks she has her life figured ou. Until she descovers dark family secrets, that open her eyes to a whole new world.
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/4850111648956416

  3. God’s Among us
    Author: @Bllueskies6
    Description; Gods and demons are both after you as a war for the universe unfolds. When your true destiny is revealed will you be able to face it? And who will stand by your side when you do? My story will have art scenes.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6609321009152000

  4. Pendulum
    Author: @Achola
    Description: When Alexis thinks her ordeals have ended, she discovers that she’s not only battling with herself and past, but a greater power too.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6323853844545536

Drama
  1. Remember Me
    Author: @Mila.Episodes
    Description: When Dean bumps into his first love, she doesn’t remember who he is. Through a series of misunderstandings, flashbacks, and heartbreak, will Dean hold on or forget her too?
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4695845464571904

  2. Best Interest
    Author: @MyEpi
    Description : After moving to a new town to get away from her narcissistic crazed ex-boyfriend, Jasmine sets out on a journey to find her own happiness.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6237545781067776

  3. Foster My Heart
    Author: @Dodo.episode
    Description: Home is where love resides, memories are created, friends always belong, and laughter never ends. Follow Aelia, while she finds her way home.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5190573529825280

Romance
  1. The Stars Have Colours
    Author: @shaharPie
    Description: Your life was made of two colors: black and white. Until one day you meet someone that shows you the world in a colorful way.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452449138933760

  2. Criminal Desires
    Author: @Zina
    Description : He is the head of the Italian mafia, you are a normal girl. At least that’s what you think… but what happens when you discover your true identity?
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/5639838213931008

  3. Josephine
    Author: @Matilda
    Description: Josephine catches her fiance in an affair. After the betrayal, she struggles to piece her life back together and find her balance…and love again.
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/6360445022961664

Mystery
  1. Pathway to Reality
    Author: @Victoriaecs
    Description: You are a college student with an interesting quality. You and your friends defy what’s unknown and it decides to fight back. Can you endure attacks of evil and fight it back?
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/6633320245690368
Comedy
  1. Miss Understood
    Author: @TheSunflowerQueen
    Description: Emilianna has always believed that the world revolves around her… until she begins working with a bunch of kids who are even more spoiled and entitled than she is.
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/5168734019584000
Adventure
  1. Stranded
    Author: @episode.vogue
    Description: After living a boring and repetitive life, you’re offered an opportunity of a lifetime. You leave your family behind and take your best friend to New York to begin your new journey. But little do you know, someone has other plans for you. The plane crashes on an island you think is inhabited. Find out what happens when you discover the real reason behind the crash.
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/6074594463645696
Thriller
  1. The Act Of Revenge
    Author:
    Description: You are just a waitress who witnessed a murder. You are accused of murder you didn’t commit. How far will you go to get justice? Will you cross a line?
    https://episodeinteractive.com/s/6610272544423936

More recommendations to come as I review more stories!

Notice

The list for reviewing stories is ever-growing and I personally don’t have enough time to review them quickly. Two volunteers have stepped up to help me with the mayhem.

Please welcome…

@Minimayday and @Epiwriter.Alexandra

Treat these guys the same respect you have done for me. Thank you!

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Hey love! I would love it if you could check out my story called Bad for Business by Samantha Marie on the app! If you would like to, here is the link…

You can read my story if you want and share your feedback. :heart:
Details:
Story Name: SOLO
Author: Bithi
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3
Description: When mysterious powers and an undeniable tragedy clash with destiny, will June be able to change the orbit of her fate?
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4645081272614912
Others: Limited CC. timed and premium choices matter.
Story Cover:

I definitely welcome any feedback or critique! Bless you for doing this☺️

Title : Best Interest
Style : Limelight
Genre : Drama
Description : After moving to a new town to get away from her narcissistic crazed ex-boyfriend, Jasmine sets out on a journey to find her own happiness. (Full CC)
Story link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6237545781067776

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Hi there girl! I have read the first chapter of your story and here’s my feedback!

Throughout the first chapter I have a few issues, the first is the way you make your characters sit. It’s very funny, they just slide down and it makes you very confused. I was thinking you could change it to the sitting action instead, that way other readers know the characters are sitting down instead of a glitch happening on the app.

The second was the starting. You had a girl come up and do the modeling thing and that’s fine but what’s confusing is you had a button saying ending chapter or something. Clearly nobody what’s to start a story by going to the end. What’s the point of playing a story then! Readers what to read a story because they want to go through it from the starting and gradually come to the end no matter how frustrating it is to not know the end. This is what captures the readers, makes them want to continue so they find out the ending.

Three is the main character. You started with the guy and gave him his point of view. Then you let us customize him and told us he was the love interest instead, not the main character. Clearly this is the most weirdest thing in the story. You started with someone else when you clearly said it centers on Cleo, the main character. To some this shows poor planning in the story. What I suggest is to delete the narrative part of the love interest and concentrate on the main character instead. Show how she starts the story, not the guy.

Besides that I think this is an excellent story. It has the drama, amazing coding and directing, the dialogues are easy to understand and you can understand the situation once you ignore the part where you give the love interest point of view.

This is all I have to say! Thanks for giving me your story to read and I hope this feedback helps you!

Hey I would love it if you could read my story.
"Love from another Realm"
By: TSTaylor
It’s a fantasy/ comedy/ romance/ drama, a little bit of everything.
I hope you like it!
:grin:

:arrow_down:Link is below :arrow_down:

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Woah, your cover is lovely. Where did you get it done from?

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Thank you for this thread! Here’s mine :sparkling_heart:

Title: Friends Without Benefits

Author: rene_writes

Description: Penny is in a dead end relationship with an emotionally unavailable guy. Luckily her best friend Mason is always there to be her emotional fluffer. The problem? He’s in love with her and she’s oblivious.

Genre: Romance/Comedy

Episodes: 3 (ongoing)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6079357337272320

Instagram: @rene_writes

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Wow finally! I love the title and synopsis. And where did you get your cover done from?

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Omg you’re so sweet, thank you!! :sparkling_heart: I actually did the cover myself :relieved:

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Here’s my story information;

Title; Gods Among Us
Genre; Fantasy
Description; Gods and demons are both after you as a war for the universe unfolds. When your true destiny is revealed will you be able to face it? And who will stand by your side when you do? My story will have art scenes.

Cover;

Link; http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6609321009152000

Instagram; @bllueskies

I would love any feedback you can give :smile:

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Greetings! Thanks for this thread. I’d love to hear any thoughts you have about my story. :grin:

Title: Eternal Oblivion
Author: Silver Lady
Genre: Fantasy primarily with some mystery, action, drama, romance, and just a hint of historical fiction thrown in from time to time (more so in later chapters).
Style: Limelight
Number of Episodes: Nine currently, more on the way.
CC: Kinda. You can’t customize the main three characters (for story reasons), but there is a character for you to customize starting with chapter five. You won’t see much of her to start, but she becomes more important later in the plot.
Description: Something ancient plots unseen in the darkness, and Amara must quickly uncover the mystery surrounding it. Otherwise, all will be lost.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6355100663873536
Covers:
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Christmas story :blush::blush::blush:


Hey girl, Thank you so much for this thread! Here is my story, I would be really happy if you give me your personal opinion about it :kiss::kiss:.
Title : Life in Demby
Author : Megz_episode
Description : The new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME?
Cover :

Episodes So far 7
Style INK
Genre : drama
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5842077707730944

If you want to pm me your thoughts that’ll be great. Here’s my info:

Title: Swiping Right
Author: Lupita
Description: After Aubrey had left her ex boyfriend she decides to explore her sexuality. Doing so she meets Haruna, and her left changes drastically.
Style: Ll
Chapters: 6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4978485809184768
Additional notes: CC, choices matter.
Instagram: episode.lupita
Cover:

Summary

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Thank you for this thread! I would love it if you read my story! :black_heart::blush: Could you PM me the feedback?

Title: Remember Me
Author: Mila.episodes
Genre: Fantasy but it’s a mix of drama and comedy too.
Style: Ink
Number of Episodes : 7
Description: When Dean bumps into his first love, she doesn’t remember who he is. Through a series of misunderstandings, flashbacks, and heartbreak, will Dean hold on or forget her too?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4695845464571904
IG: mila.episodes

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Thanks very much for this!!!

My story The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

It has two versions ink and limelight

Hi Kana,

Thank you for doing this. If you’re not too busy with all these stories, I’d like to present you mine as well it’s called Foster my heart. It’s a drama story in ink style, here’s the synopsis:

" Home is where love resides, memories are created, friends always belong, and laughter never ends. Follow Aelia, while she finds her way home. "

I’m going to pop mine in here too. I hope you enjoy it!
Title: Josephine (LL)
Author: Matilda
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 7 (more coming)
Description: Josephine catches her fiance in an affair. After the betrayal, she struggles to piece her life back together and find her balance…and love again.
Http://www.instagram.com/Matilda.episode.com


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