Want someone to do a story review on your story?

Hey! I’ve become kinda bored recently & love to read some of your stories! I would be doing a story review on it because sometimes we want someone to give feedback on it!
Comment your story down below! Follow the rules though!
If you would like me to do a story review, your story must be published, then I’ll gladly do it!

:star: RULES:

  • Be patient with me & don’t pressure me because I won’t always get to it right away!
  • I’m not going to review every story commented!
  • Please be respectful when I give my review on your story because it’s my honest opinion
  • Please write the description & title of the story in the comments!

I will PM the people who’s stories I pick to read! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

If you want to read my story to you can read it through the link below! Enjoy!


Hello! Thank you for this chance. I just published this story yesterday. Would love to know what you think.:blush:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6313427103580160

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Hi! If you have time, could you read/review my story? It’s called Offspring’s Generation. Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5306679386505216

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This is my first story hope uh guys like it :blob_hearts:

Title - The Magic School
Author - Silver
Insta - _silver.shade71 / _silver.epi

Genre - Fantasy/Mystery
Story Style - Limelight
Chapters - 5
Description - Magic, does it exist? You got to know that you’re the most powerful magical but with that comes secrets. Will you be able to handle the pressure? |CC| Games| LI

Link - (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5781841416486912)

Hope you will read it nd give your feedbacks :star_struck:

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Queen | Lana Augustine | Four Episodes Out Now | Limited C.C | Drama | Mafia | Fame & Fortune |

Instagram: LanaAugustine

Impactful Timed Choices
Character Development Based Story
Black Main Character


World-Renowned Rap Star Kay has been on a 1-year hiatus after hooking up with the man of her dreams Tae Yang. Supposedly somewhere on the white-sand coastline of Costa Rica drinking champagne with the love of her life. At the high of her career and the music industry at her fingertips. At least that’s what the media has been told.

But that couldn’t be farther from the truth. The truth was far more ugly & painful. Her celebrity status was on a decline and her perfect boyfriend was far from perfection.

He was everything she never asked for. It all comes to a head when she finally has the courage to run away and back into the arms of a familiar face.

Her boss, manager, & founder Hikaru Hitachi…

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bump :hugs::heart:

Here is mine :blob_turtle: Would love to hear your opinion! :smile:
Title - Blood source
Chapters - 4

Link - (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6073923975315456)

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Hey, @episode_amber3 Thank you so much for the thread! :cherry_blossom:

I would love to hear your thoughts on my story! I’ve been working on it for over a year and released it three weeks ago. I hope you’ll enjoy the reading :cherry_blossom:

ICARUS by Archangel

A Thriller|Mystery|Sci-Fi - story

Story description
A cunning detective and an evasive criminal cross paths and together they realize that flying too close to the sun might be their greatest downfall.


  • Two MC:s
  • Mature themes
  • Impactful and meaningful choices
  • Multiple endings
  • Important side-characters
What is the general plot of ICARUS?

How often do you update?


Follow my instagram @archangel.stories for updates, sneak peaks, general trivia and have a look at my carrd https://archangelstories.carrd.co/ for information about release schedule/dates and general questions.

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I’d love to know what you think about it💕.

Title: 𝑰 𝑾𝒊𝒍𝒍 𝑨𝒍𝒘𝒂𝒚𝒔 𝑹𝒆𝒎𝒆𝒎𝒃𝒆𝒓 𝒀𝒐𝒖

(It’s my first story, new btw)

I used advanced directing and I really hope you enjoy the plot if you do decide to read it!

Description: After her sister’s disappearance, Adriana starts an adventure with her sister’s ex. His shady past and choices, put her life in danger. Will she hate or forgive him in the end?

Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6127258125664256

My Instagram: @episode.nefeli_ :heart:︎ (TRAILER, SNEAK PEEKS, UPDATES)

Art scenes, full cc, ll, choices

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:

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Here is my mystery story.

Title: Roses Are Red
Genre: Mystery
Author: The Button Bop
Style: Limelight
Synopsis: In 1955, 6 girls are invited to a mysterious house. But what awaits inside are secrets that have been kept for centuries, and a complicated game waiting to be played.
Status: More episodes coming soon

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Thank you so much for this thread! Here is my story if you have time to review it :blob_hearts:

  • Title: My Protector
  • Genre: Action (Also includes romance, drama, and mystery)
  • Style: LL
  • Description: After discovering your family’s secret, you fled to NYC. Until you met him, who’s willing to protect you. Will you uncover the truth of your family’s secret and fall in love?
  • Chapters: 5 (More Coming Soon)
  • Instagram: @storiesbybless
  • Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5677298753404928

Some Important Features Included:

  • Art Scene (s)
  • Full CC
  • Different POV’s
  • Advanced Directing
  • Sounds/ Music



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I’m sorry I didn’t read the message properly. My story is not published.

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Hi! Thank you for this thread. Hope all is well💜 Here is my first story info. Would gladly appreciate if you can review my story. However once the review is completed, please message me privately on forums, just in case. Click on the word “Details” to find out more.


Title: Persuade By You
Author: Damira S.
Episodes current consist: 5
Status: Ongoing
Animation Style: Limelight
Customization: Available
Story description: As a lost soul, Giada Elmourne unintentionally intervenes with Brody’s classic expectations. Little do they know, what untold brought to unravel.
Story’s link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5552516443078656

Hope you don’t mind. Thank you!

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bump :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Thanks for this thread! :heart:
I’d love if you could read & review my story!
Story Beautiful Disaster
Author Rogue_Gypsy
Genre Romance/Drama
Status On-going (currently 11 chapters)
IG Rogue_Gypsy_Writes
Description Newly single Harlee discovers something beautiful can come out of disaster & heartbreak…and not everything is what it seems…

I’d love any feedback you could offer. :star_struck:


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Hey tysm for doing this and I would love to read your story.

Title :Not You
Description: You are forced to go on a mission with the last person you could ever think of! Will butterflies flutter? Ofc not! Cause you both fight like cats and dogs.

Here’s the link :

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Hi! I would love to receive a review!

My story is about a girl who moves to NY with her mother and her new boyfriend, and she’s going to find a city and people she’ll eventually learn to love. The story aims at reflecting the struggles teengaers go thrpugh, such as loss of a loved one, eating disorders etc. Some people might see my story as a stretch but I believe that is an amazing value that most people can identify theirselves in at least one of the characters.


Hello, I would love a review for my story.
Description: *The twins returned to where it all began. *
*As they deal with their past, chaos reigns. *
Will they be able to overcome their demons?
Chapters: 3 (More coming soon…)
Genre: Action
Style: Limelight

Instagram: @Maine.Writes

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Here’s my story! http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5539232931446784

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