Want to do a R4R or just a story review?


#21

alright


#22

@mystique_writer

I am done with the first chapter of ur story :blush:

Here is your review:

-At the beginning of the story, try to have a different background
-The first time Darja cries, maybe try deleting that one and just make her cry the second time
-It is a little confusing on what going on at first but then u kind of understand it so try to put a little more info on what’s going on

That’s all I have :blush: I like your story and let me know if u want more chapters of your story reviewed


#23

@Hessa I’m gonna start ur right now :blush:


#24

Thank you for your opinion :slight_smile: If you could read more of my story and give me your feedback, I would really appreciate it! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Why kind of background do you mean?
And yes, I know it is a bit confusing, but that is actually what I am aiming for. It makes sense during the first three episodes much more and adding more into the first one would just ruin it.


#25

@Hessa

I’ve finished reading the first 2 chapters of your story :blush:

I really like it


#26

Ok I will start on chapters of your story


#27

And the background I meant was when darja starts talking


#28

Here you go :blush:


And i liked it too.


#29

Hey I would love to do a read for read with you🤗
Title: Honour Among Thieves
Name of author: Shanties❤
Story Genre: Drama
Description: A trio of friends. 1 deadly secret. Who will break first?
Style : Limelight
Episodes : 3 (Ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5319157333491712


Follow and/or message me on Instagram: @episode_shanties. My DM’s are always openn☀️


#30

Alright I will start reading your soon :blush: