I am done with the first chapter of ur story
Here is your review:
-At the beginning of the story, try to have a different background
-The first time Darja cries, maybe try deleting that one and just make her cry the second time
-It is a little confusing on what going on at first but then u kind of understand it so try to put a little more info on what’s going on
That’s all I have I like your story and let me know if u want more chapters of your story reviewed
Thank you for your opinion If you could read more of my story and give me your feedback, I would really appreciate it!
Why kind of background do you mean?
And yes, I know it is a bit confusing, but that is actually what I am aiming for. It makes sense during the first three episodes much more and adding more into the first one would just ruin it.
Ok I will start on chapters of your story
And the background I meant was when darja starts talking
Hey I would love to do a read for read with you🤗
Title: Honour Among Thieves
Name of author: Shanties❤
Story Genre: Drama
Description: A trio of friends. 1 deadly secret. Who will break first?
Style : Limelight
Episodes : 3 (Ongoing)
Follow and/or message me on Instagram: @episode_shanties. My DM’s are always openn☀️
Alright I will start reading your soon