Hey I read all of your episodes! I really like your story and I can’t wait to see what’s the whole deal with the fighting and everything. I honestly did think he was going to be a vampire Secretly hoping he still is lol! The only thing I guess is that I hate limelight, and I think ink is the best. Also, there are a lot of places where there should be commas and periods, so you have a lot of run on sentences. Other than that, this story has a really interesting plot! Can’t wait for the next episodes <3
Here is my story
Author: Amber Daisies
Description: With Customizable Characters, Complement is about a guy and a girl who were destined to be together and defeat a great evil. Lucy is light, and Onyx is shade. Together, they can control all that is in creation. Lucy is not aware of her powers until she gets to university, where she learns about everything. Can Lucy and Onyx navigate each other in time to save the world?