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Okay, definitely!

Can I get your full story name, please?

I found it. Haha.
It’s a really great story! Interesting genre too! You’ll get better at spot directing, it takes a long time. I wish it was easier! Also, the sitting thing, sometimes you can just spot direct them to the waist up and it looks like they’re sitting :slight_smile: you should say something about them having powers in the description! That will draw in more people! I love stories like that! Continue writing!

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found it. Haha.
It’s a really great story! Interesting genre too! You’ll get better at spot directing, it takes a long time. I wish it was easier! Also, the sitting thing, sometimes you can just spot direct them to the waist up and it looks like they’re sitting :slight_smile: you should say something about them having powers in the description! That will draw in more people! I love stories like that! Continue writing!

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Aw, Thanks! And i’ll surely work on the spot directing :wink:

Hi!! I’m up for a R4R :heart_eyes:
Titel: The Stranger
Author: evelinawrites
Genre: romance and drama
Description: Sarah starts college and see this as a new start. There she meets a Stranger and her life turns upside down. Will she find happiness or will the past destroy everything?

Hey! I’m Alex and I just published my new story and i would love to hear your thoughts. You can also dm me on instagram if you like it! @alex.woods27

Title: October’s Love
Author: Alex Woods
Genre: Adventure
Episodes: 3 (more episodes coming soon)
Description: October is living a cozy-perfect life with her mother Allina. What happens when their life takes an unexpected turn?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6648621507936256

Here’s the cover for my story:


Happy reading! :slight_smile:

Reading all stories now! c:

How the Fire Started review.

Directing: Was good. There were mistakes and issues in all three episodes though. Make sure when the nurse and doctor kiss, they’re aligned properly.

Grammar: Did super well! Just remember in titles connecting words like “the” are not cap. on the first letter. Also, your and you’re are way different. Same with thee, and there.

Overall: I mostly understood the plot, but make sure you give things out slowly, little by little so that it’s pieced out. Check your spelling, and make sure to enjoy it! Great stuff.

     ~ Limee

Thanks! I’ll make sure to work on that!

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Great! c;

Sure! I’d like feedback, and I’ll do a read for read. Can you PM me the review, before posting it here?

Title: Cruelty of Ice
Author: Miranda Lynn
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: Lies, envy, betrayal, love and drama… Savannah is the new girl at Sierra High, but what happens when she meets an old enemy? You decide!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4850620796633088

(For now)

@Maggy @Anna.writer @OhhGlam26 @evelinawrites @Alexwoods @loveyourself , hie i am shona, i will be doing reviews of your strory and posting on my instagram - @shona_episode … i am with @L.I.W.F , for doing reviews. she is doing r4r and i do reviews. i will post them there as soon as possible. kindly follow me for updates…

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Hey, can you PM me my review?

Sure…

Thank you! I don’t have instagram :confused: is there any way I can still view your review? :slight_smile:

Title- Hidden Behind Lies…
Genre- Romance but will be abit of action…
Description- What happens when your dad has a past and it finally catches up to you? Nothing is what it seems…

story link_ http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630728767930368

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Thank you!

A read for read would be greatly appreciated! Let me know when you read mine <3
By the way My story is called Love is Lost.
Please read and leave me some feedbacks <3 It would mean the world to me!!!
Title: Love is Lost
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: Drama & Romance
Episodes: 12 - completed
Description: Athena thought she has finally found her true love, but is life really that easy? Her life went from being on top of the world to everybody betraying her after meeting “him”. She tried and tried to get her old life back until she finally met someone else. Will this someone be the one for her? Or will this someone be another disaster in her life?
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