What did I do wrong. It says it's an error


#1

choice
“Show some sass” {

&MC starts talk_angry_accuse
Listen here, you wanna be barbie doll

&JULIA starts startled_surprised
@pause for a beat

&MC starts talk_angry_accuse
Your attuide have been getting on my nerves since I met you

&JULIA starts arms_crossed_angry
@pause for a beat

&MC starts talk_pound_chest
And if you ever so think I’m going to let you ruin this year your wrong

&MC starts talk_angry_arms_crossed
I’m going to-

&JULIA starts talk_angry_arms_crossed
Your going to what

&MC starts arms_crossed_angry
@pause for a beat

} “Stay silent” {

&MC starts arms_crossed_angry

&JULIA starts laugh_giggle
Don’t have anything to say

&MC starts eyeroll_subtle
@pause for a beat

&JULIA starts arms_crossed_angry
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

}


#2

put the person who is talkings name above the line of diologue


#3

Then how do I make them use emotions?


#4

If you want to make someone say something whilst doing an emotion you format it like this:

   CHARACTER (animation name here)

Speech here.

Obviously “CHARACTER” would be your character’s name and the name of the animation would be in the brackets, example: (idle) and the speech you want the character to say would be on the line after (the one that says “speech here.”


#5

You say:
@MC (talk_angry_accuse)
Your attitude has been getting on my nerves since I met you.

And keep doing that for all diolouge


#6

Thank you :slightly_smiling_face:


#7

Now I have a new problem, One the side it says error, I’m not sure why because I thought I did everything right. This is what I have… HELP PLEASE

choice
“Show some sass” {

    MC (talk_angry_accuse)
Listen here, you wanna be barbie doll


    JULIA (startled_surprised)
Excuse me


    MC (talk_angry_accuse)
Your attitude have been getting on my nerves since I met you

    JULIA (arms_crossed_angry)
(UH)

    MC (talk_pound_chest)
And if you ever so think I'm going to let you ruin this year your wrong

    MC (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I'm going to-

    JULIA (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Your going to what

    MC (arms_crossed_angry)

} “Stay silent” {

    MC (arms_crossed_angry)
(The nerve of this girl)

    JULIA (laugh_giggle)
Don't have anything to say

    MC (eyeroll_subtle)
(Oh I have plenty)

    JULIA (arms_crossed_angry)
(Who in the hell she think she is, ignoring me)

}


#8

Now I have a new problem, One the side it says error, I’m not sure why because I thought I did everything right. This is what I have… HELP PLEASE

choice
“Show some sass” {

MC (talk_angry_accuse)

Listen here, you wanna be barbie doll

JULIA (startled_surprised)

Excuse me

MC (talk_angry_accuse)

Your attitude have been getting on my nerves since I met you

JULIA (arms_crossed_angry)

(UH)

MC (talk_pound_chest)

And if you ever so think I’m going to let you ruin this year your wrong

MC (talk_angry_arms_crossed)

I’m going to-

JULIA (talk_angry_arms_crossed)

Your going to what

MC (arms_crossed_angry)

You need to add dialogue here, or do @MC is arms_crossed_angry

}


#9

Thank you


#10

No problem! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: If you ever need help with choices, let me know.


#11

And another question, is there a reason why I can’t view my story. The area where I’m able to look at it it says “Error 11” at the top, under preview.


#12

Sometimes that happens to me, when I press Memory, or just my wi-fi being bad.
Try to refresh, and if it still occurs, PM me…It could be a script error!


#13

Omg lol, refresh made it work. :joy: your a genius, thank you so much for your help. This story is seriously beating up :joy::joy:


#14

Don’t worry, I get the same way! :joy: