Story description:
Lexi’s point of view:
Lexi has her dream life- being a smart, funny model, having a loving family and an amazing bff. All that’s missing is her love. She doesn’t know she’s met him countless times.
Nate’s point of view:
Nate is part of a growing band. He never knew he really wanted a relationship until he bumped into Lexi. He knew there was chemistry- but when his band goes on a worldwide tour, he tries to forget her.
Does it work? Or is the chem to strong?
Hi! This story has a lot of potential and think it’s off to a good start, but I was just wondering what type of challenges the characters have to face throughout the story. Also, (this is just a suggestion, it’s entirely up to u) maybe to make Lexy stick in Nate’s head they could meet at a concert (and he doesn’t know who she is), and then later on find out she’s a model (I don’t know if you want to make her a famous model or a model that’s just starting out) and then that could play into his attraction to her. Just a suggestion tho, you can do whatever u want. It’s a good story, sounds like something I would read!
Thank you so much! I will defiently take your suggestion! Lexy’s biggest chellenge is she almost gets bankrupt- and falls into a trance of deppresion because everything around her is falling.
I think the story has a lot of potential, but personally I like when the stories are told by one point of view, so we don’t know what is going on in the LI’s head
Characters:
Lexy (MC)
Pearl (MC’s bff)
Nate (Bf)
Chelsey (Mom)
Noah (Dad)
Story description:
Lexi’s point of view:
Lexi has her dream life- being a smart, funny model, having a loving family and an amazing bff. All that’s missing is her love. She doesn’t know she’s met him countless times.
Nate’s point of view:
Nate is part of a growing band. He never knew he really wanted a relationship until he bumped into Lexi. He knew there was chemistry- but when his band goes on a worldwide tour, he tries to forget her.
Does it work? Or is the chem to strong?
Any suggestions?
I think this story might have potential. However keep in mind that many authors have attempted Hollywood stories. I’d say less succeeded in making these stories. To truly blossom your story, you need substance — meaning, you need more content and not just fillers, but also meaningful content that add to the story. Do the characters have unique backstories? Is there any interesting way in how they met each other? Or maybe would you rather it to be romantic? How will you draw in the reader etc.
