Soā¦Iām thinking about a fantasy storyā¦
Title is āThe Love Cookieā 
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Story Plot
The girl MC (Main Character) is a simple girl whoās got a crush on her bestieās boyfriend, but he doesnt like her back, obv 
She doesnāt like violence, so she just tries t hold back her tears whenever she sees them together. Now, one day, she got SO SAD she tried to go FAR away from her home into a deep dark forest. There, she meets a witch who gives her the āLOVE COOKIEā .
Those who will eat the cookie, the first person seeing her will fall in love with her.
The witch ALSO WARNED THAT she MUST only take a small biteā¦or else, things will be BAD.
Now, the MC takes a huge risk and eats the WHOLE cookieā¦Oopsā¦ 
Now, EVERY SINGLE person who sees her falls in love with herā¦ 
But, will her bestieās boyfriend also fall in love with her?
What do you think about the story plot?
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Woah-
Isnāt that just TOOOO intriguing
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Idkā¦is it?
You dont like the plot right? 
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Wait NOOOO
I loved it. Like itās really different and just what I would like to read after our boards adiba
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My boards exams got cancelled , but idk if I should be happy or sad
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Have u published it as a R&R entry yet, bc I believe the deadline is today or tmrw 
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Nahhhhā¦Iām not gonna publish it as R&Rā¦
Iām too lateā¦
But how is the plot?
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Uhmā¦ ngl, Itās not smth I would readā¦ Iām not rlly into that kind of thingā¦ however, here r sum suggestions
Try ask these questionsā¦
Why does she go into the forest?
Why does she eat the entire cookie?
And as a continuing point, maybe she could spend time w n start dating the guy she likes bc obviously heās enchanted by spell. Anyway, then maybe the spell could wear off over time & everyone hates her for what she did, however, the guy could be in love w her from all the time he spent w her & suddenly realize what he was missing.
Also, I recommend making the BFF a dislikable character bc if the mcās gonna go after her mans, u need to make sure ppl donāt feel sympathy for her.
Just sum suggestions haha
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It really reminds me the movie āBraveā
I love it. Itās a great idea!
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Yeahhā¦well, I love this ideaā¦
but I thought making the bff bitchy would be a litlle cliche
but thank you for the sugesstions ! 
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Haha yes! That would defo b cliche asf
I meant more, maybe giving her a manipulative flavor. Perhaps sheās aware her friend likes him & thatās the only reason sheās still w him, bc she doesnāt want her to have him. Maybe sheās emotionally manipulating both of them to separate them. I too, despise the usual mean girl bs. But underneath, lots of ppl have a manipulative aim n persona so, sometimes adding it slowly in, stronger n stronger throughout the story can b rlly effective! 
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Wowā¦thank youu for the suggestionā¦
If i decide to code it, maybe youāll help me co-write?
i love the way you give the ideas
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Iām not entering R&r
But tysm bestie!!! Love youuu!! 
Sounds like a great story plot!
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It sounds interesting 
I mean, if definitely read it but as long as you can keep the story going yk? 
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Hahaā¦yesā¦I would try to make the episodes more longer ā¦if I start writing it one day 
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Haha thatās what I thought!
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