Uhm… ngl, It’s not smth I would read… I’m not rlly into that kind of thing… however, here r sum suggestions
Try ask these questions…
Why does she go into the forest?
Why does she eat the entire cookie?
And as a continuing point, maybe she could spend time w n start dating the guy she likes bc obviously he’s enchanted by spell. Anyway, then maybe the spell could wear off over time & everyone hates her for what she did, however, the guy could be in love w her from all the time he spent w her & suddenly realize what he was missing.
Also, I recommend making the BFF a dislikable character bc if the mc’s gonna go after her mans, u need to make sure ppl don’t feel sympathy for her.
Just sum suggestions haha 