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I’m writing a new story called ‘French In Disguise’! Here’s the desc!

When a ‘blazing’ villain meets up with her old friend from high school, can they team up together to be disguised as heroes?

This is the plot!

Pancha (The first mc) is a French woman who has fire powers from an big accident at 15. She always wanted to use her powers for good, but people hypnotized her into being both a hero and a villain. She finds her old friend (Second mc) from school who was a class clown and they become villains in disguised. But they didn’t know what was really going to happen to them after they made this decision…

Share in the comments about what you think about it!

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Ooh I likee

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Thanks!

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But are they pretending to be heroes or villains?

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They’re pretending to be heroes but are actually villains!

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Nice, sounds very original and interesting :+1:

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This is cool! Is it a comedy? and are their any love interests?

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:grin:

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Its a Comedy and Action story! I’m thinking of the old friend can be one of the love interests and then one more person!

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That’s cool!!! They need more good comedy on episode.

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Yes I totally agree!

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This sounds like that new Amazon Prime Dramady “the Boys,” luckily I’m too broke to afford Amazon Prime, so this will definitely be on my radar.

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I love the idea!! I would totally read it!!

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:smile: Thanks!

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I would of checked it out if I had Amazon Prime!

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Sounds original! I’d like to read it!! Link me when you publish puh lease! :pleading_face::love_you_gesture:t3: (I know please doesn’t spell like that, it’s my way of being weird I suppose omskdk lol)

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Thanks! I’m working on episode 1!

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I like it!

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Thanks!

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This plot line is fantastic! How many chapters do you plan on making it?

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