with good directing and writing, i think it could be pretty good, but i think it seems a little… too much. just a little.
there are countless stories across the internet about abused girls, youtube singers, and single mothers. and you just… pushed them all together. if that’s what you’re into, then that’s totally okay, but it just doesn’t sound all that original. obviously, abuse is very serious and all, but it’s been done before. i just don’t see how it’ll be different from all the others. the singing is nice, but it’s lacking a personal spin, and the “plot twist” is a very common cliche that is all over Episode and other websites.
it’s fine if you like that kind of story, but it just seems pretty unoriginal to me.