So I need some feedback on my storyline. My story idea is:
You are a young girl who is abused, and your only escape is music. You make covers on YouTube and Instagram. What happens when one goes viral? Plot twist: You’re a single mother without any parenting help.
Hmm… It sounds pretty good and I would probably read it but the single parenting thing just isn’t my cup of tea. I would suggest showing her dealing with depression or suicidal thoughts/self harming in a way that doesn’t glorify it. And maybe the use of emotive hardcore, or ‘emo’, music could really set the scene.
Overall, 8/10 idea that could be great, but I personally wouldn’t read it if the young girl had to deal with her child… Maybe have it be her sibling?
I decided that the single parenting was a bit much, so I deleted that part. xD I chose a sibling, instead. Specifically one that went missing when she was younger, and she’s still looking for him. Does that sound better?
Yes!! Thanks for reading my suggestion Feel free to ask me for anything, I’ll help if I can. Can you tell me when it’s published? I can’t wait to read it.
I decided to change it into her being the only girl in the entire world with superpowers. There’s this guy that hates her guts, but is a huge fan of the superhero her. Then, he finds out her secret but doesn’t tell her that he knows. :3 I literally cannot make up my mind, but I think this is the final choice.
He isn’t telling her because he wants her to start liking him, without her thinking that he just wants her because she is a superhero. You get what I mean?