Whilst it’s not bad, it’s clean and tidy and not messy. I’m a little stumped as to the following things…
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Why is the guy on the left holding a pen? Is that important in some way?
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There is HUGE height difference between him and the girl.
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Who is the MC. If it is the girl, then she is massively overcast by both men, when she should be the centre focus.