What do you think of this story description? (Paris Aroha)

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I’m putting together a story that was written by a friend. I’m wondering what you think of these story descriptions? Which is more intriguing to you?

The story is self-explanatory in the description.

  • “You’re busy with studies, but you can’t ignore the mysterious and lonely boy that is by you in your college class…”

  • “What happens when two introverts meet? Karina is busy with her studies, but she can’t ignore the mysterious and lonely that always sits next to her in class…”

Also please feel free to come up with a description of your own, that you think would be better. Your suggestions and feedback is very much appreciated! :blob_hearts: :white_heart: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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I like this one more, idk why but this one feels more natural and intriguing, also tag me when the story is out, I’d love giving it a try

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Thanks, (: Good to know! And sure I will!

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This one sounds better to me :slight_smile:
And tag me as well when it’s out

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I will do that, thank you. :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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I like the first one. I think it would fit better and story descriptions usually include questions so I think they’re more interesting and beautiful when there are no questions in the descriptions

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Yeah I agree with that. Thanks! :grinning:

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I like the 1st one it sounds like its gonna be such a cute romance

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