What is wrong here 3


#1


BTW I’m sorry for always asking some questions but I’m really new to writeng on web and IDK how to “close” those errors so I need to aks.


#2

You need to put the “OLD FRIEND is laugh_chuckle” at the beginning of the line, and you need to use a @.
eg :

   OLDFRIEND
 (OMG OUTFIT, I'm dying)

@OLD FRIEND is laugh_chuclke


#3

I did that,but ther is still an error on line 222


#4

Oh okay didn’t notice that! You need to skip a line after the {
This way, the “NARRATOR (MOM)” will be in blue, just like it is in the previous lines


#5

Thank you :grin:


#6


#7

There’s still the same problem with the narration.
Eg :

INT. SELFIE FEMALE 3

            NARRATOR (MOM)

Hey don’t be scared…

Then you certainly also didn’t close the bracket. Could you send a picture of the end of the choice?


#8


#9

You need to skip a line after the INT. SELFIE FEMALE 3
This way, the “NARRATOR (MOM)” will be in blue, such as it is above.
And you need to skip a line too before putting the closing bracket.