What is wrong with this choise script?


#1
NIELS (talk_flirt)
By taking you to the movies Saturday ...

@zoom reset

    SABINE (dismayed)
(There goes my Saturday!)

ANNEKE is (think)
(What should I do?)

choice
“Should I say yes” {

ANNEKE (talk_exclaim_yes)
Okay! Pick me up at seven.

    NIELS (talk_exclaim_yes)
Oh yes, I will!

} “should I say no?” {

ANNEKE (talk_doubtful)
No Niels? I don’t feel like it!

    NIELS (talk_exclaim_yes)
Oh yes, you will when we are there.

ANNEKE (talk_doubtful)
Ok then pick me up at 7

NIELS (talk_exclaim_yes)
Oh yes, I will!

{

thank you

xxx


#2

The last {} should be facing }


#3

shanged it it still gives an error:

script;

NIELS (talk_flirt)
By taking you to the movies Saturday …

@zoom reset

    SABINE (dismayed)
(There goes my Saturday!)

ANNEKE is (think)
(What should I do?)

choice

“Should I say yes” {

ANNEKE (talk_exclaim_yes)
Okay! Pick me up at seven.

    NIELS (talk_exclaim_yes)
Oh yes, I will!

} “should I say no?” {

ANNEKE (talk_doubtful)
No Niels? I don’t feel like it!

    NIELS (talk_exclaim_yes)
Oh yes, you will when we are there.

ANNEKE (talk_doubtful)
Ok then, if you insist, pick me up at 7

NIELS (talk_exclaim_yes)
Oh yes, I will!
}


#4

it says unexepected dialog should i say yes …


#5

Can you post a screenshot?


#6

remove is


#7

moment x


#8


#9

I cant it is here choise x


#10

Yes, you can remove is.

It needs to say:

ANNEKE (think)
(What should I do?)


#11

Also try NOT to skip a line between choice and “Should I say yes”{

“Should I say yes”{ should be on line 1410.


#12

Did that no i get this error;


#13

See, now I felt like I was a master at coding, then you came along and finished the rest of helping her with errors…I consider myself a semi-master now… :joy:


#14

Try this:


#15

yes it worked thank you very much x


#16

Ah @livvy613 don’t say that about yourself!

You’re coding skills are cool, OK?! :wink:

Be more confident :smile: :orange_heart:


#17

No problem :nerd_face: :sparkles:

Good luck :sunny: :tada:


#18

Thanks for helping me here same problem


#19

i give the whole script there are 2 phone calls:

NARRATOR (DR RENAUD)
I need to call Anneke, I must see her…
It would be more interesting if I tell her at dinner.
label phone

    DR RENAUD (think)
(I think the number was...)

choice
“777-1847-383”{
DR RENAUD (think)
(I think it was 777-1847-383.)
&DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop
DR RENAUD (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hello?

INT. BAR - DAY

sound phone_ring

@pause for 2

@MBG1 spot 1.280 -160 0 AND MBG1 faces right
@MBG1 walks to spot 1.280 160 0 in 3 AND MBG1 does it while walk_neutral
@MBG1 starts listen_phone_neutral_loop

    MBG1 (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hello! What would you like to order from Ludovic's restaurant of Sausage?

INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Sorry, I think I have the wrong number...

@DR RENAUD is deepbreath

INT. BAR - DAY

&MBG1 stands screen center AND MBG1 is listen_phone_neutral_loop
@speechbubble is 204 253 to 100% with tail_top_left
MBG1 (talk_shrug)
I guess he doesn’t like sausage.
@speechbubble reset

INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is arms_crossed

@speechbubble is 201 255 to 100% with tail_top_left
DR RENAUD (arms_crossed)
(That was the wrong number.)

    DR RENAUD (think)
(I'll try again.)

@speechbubble reset

choise
}
“555-253-5539”{
@speechbubble is 209 256 to 100% with tail_top_left
DR RENAUD (think)
(I think it was 555-253-5539.)
@speechbubble reset

@DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hello?

@pause for 3

INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.266 152 -22 in zone 2 at layer 6 AND ANNEKE faces right AND ANNEKE is listen_phone_happy_loop
&BACKGROUND2 spot 0.525 151 370 in zone 2 at layer 3 AND BACKGROUND2 faces left AND BACKGROUND2 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND3 spot 0.511 105 375 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND BACKGROUND3 faces right AND BACKGROUND3 is nod_loop
&BACKGROUND4 spot 0.429 288 387 in zone 2 at layer 1 AND BACKGROUND4 faces left AND BACKGROUND4 is cry_sniff_loop
&BACKGROUND7 spot 0.525 350 327 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND BACKGROUND7 faces left AND BACKGROUND7 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND6 spot 0.479 252 358 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND BACKGROUND6 faces right AND BACKGROUND6 is nod_loop
sound phone_ring

@pause for 2
@speechbubble is 223 197 to 100% with tail_top_left
ANNEKE (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Hello, Anneke speaking?
@speechbubble reset
INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hey, Anneke!

INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.266 152 -22 in zone 2 at layer 6 AND ANNEKE faces right AND ANNEKE is listen_phone_happy_loop
&BACKGROUND2 spot 0.525 151 370 in zone 2 at layer 3 AND BACKGROUND2 faces left AND BACKGROUND2 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND3 spot 0.511 105 375 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND BACKGROUND3 faces right AND BACKGROUND3 is nod_loop
&BACKGROUND4 spot 0.429 288 387 in zone 2 at layer 1 AND BACKGROUND4 faces left AND BACKGROUND4 is cry_sniff_loop
&BACKGROUND7 spot 0.525 350 327 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND BACKGROUND7 faces left AND BACKGROUND7 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND6 spot 0.479 252 358 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND BACKGROUND6 faces right AND BACKGROUND6 is nod_loop

@speechbubble is 192 205 to 100% with tail_top_left
ANNEKE (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Renaud, I was hoping that you would call.
@speechbubble reset
INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (talk_phone_happy_loop)
I had a lot to do and I don't have time now either. Can we meet later for dinner? I will send you the details.

INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@NIELS changes face into Square Jaw
@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.266 152 -22 in zone 2 at layer 6 AND ANNEKE faces right AND ANNEKE is listen_phone_happy_loop
&BACKGROUND2 spot 0.525 151 370 in zone 2 at layer 3 AND BACKGROUND2 faces left AND BACKGROUND2 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND3 spot 0.511 105 375 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND BACKGROUND3 faces right AND BACKGROUND3 is nod_loop
&BACKGROUND4 spot 0.429 288 387 in zone 2 at layer 1 AND BACKGROUND4 faces left AND BACKGROUND4 is cry_sniff_loop
&BACKGROUND7 spot 0.525 350 327 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND BACKGROUND7 faces left AND BACKGROUND7 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND6 spot 0.479 252 358 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND BACKGROUND6 faces right AND BACKGROUND6 is nod_loop
@speechbubble is 221 220 to 100% with tail_top_left
ANNEKE (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oh yes, I would love to.
@speechbubble reset
INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Ok, see you later. Bye Anneke.

INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@NIELS changes face into Square Jaw
@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.266 152 -22 in zone 2 at layer 6 AND ANNEKE faces right AND ANNEKE is listen_phone_happy_loop
&BACKGROUND2 spot 0.525 151 370 in zone 2 at layer 3 AND BACKGROUND2 faces left AND BACKGROUND2 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND3 spot 0.511 105 375 in zone 2 at layer 2 AND BACKGROUND3 faces right AND BACKGROUND3 is nod_loop
&BACKGROUND4 spot 0.429 288 387 in zone 2 at layer 1 AND BACKGROUND4 faces left AND BACKGROUND4 is cry_sniff_loop
&BACKGROUND7 spot 0.525 350 327 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND BACKGROUND7 faces left AND BACKGROUND7 is listen_phone_excited_loop
&BACKGROUND6 spot 0.479 252 358 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND BACKGROUND6 faces right AND BACKGROUND6 is nod_loop
@speechbubble is 226 218 to 100% with tail_top_left
ANNEKE (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Bye Renaud, see you later.
@speechbubble reset
INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Bye Anneke I am looking forward to it, and dress fancy}

INT. BUREAUDR - DAY
&DR RENAUD stands screen center AND DR RENAUD is listen_phone_neutral_loop

    DR RENAUD (cheer_loop)
(YES!!!)

&DR RENAUD exits left

@transition fade out black 2


#20

So, after a quick glance at the screenshot you provided, I can see that you skipped a line when no line was supposed to be skipped.

Here’s how you’d write it:

DR. RENAUD (think)
(I’ll try again.)

@speechbubble reset

goto phone

}
“555-253-5539”{

Or

DR. RENAUD (think)
(I’ll try again.)

@speechbubble reset

goto phone

}“555-253-5539”{

Note that:

It should look like this:

} “Random Option” {

or

}
“Random Option” {

Do NOT skip a line by writing this:

}

“Random Option” {

It should come right after.