What is wrong with this script? please someone x

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choice

“The nun” {
LIEVE (talk_scared_flashlight)
Isn’t that a scary one.
MARC (laugh_giggle)
Are you scared quickly?
LIEVE (talk_angry_stubborn)
No!
MARC (talk_airquotes)
Prove it!
LIEVE (talk_apathetic)
Ok we go!
} “50 shades of grey” {
NIELS (talk_doubtful)
That is not for boys.
MARC (talk_happy_agree)
I agree.
NIELS (talk_apathetic)
But ok lets give the girls there way.
LIEVE (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks
} “The new dirty dancing” {
MARC (talk_doubtful)
For girls…
NIELS (talk_happy_agree)
I agree.
MARC (talk_apathetic)
But ok lets give the girls there way.
LIEVE (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks

}

thanks xxx

error says unexpected choise did you include a choice without a line off dialoque before it?,

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Don’t skip a line between choice and “The nun”

Also make sure you have dialogue before a choice : )

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No it isn’t that x

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What does it say before choice?

Can you show that part? :thinking:

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@MARC is admire
@ANNEKE is nod_loop
LIEVE (talk_greet)
Hey boys…so witch movie are we going to see?
sound music_latinguitarpop

choice

“The nun”{
LIEVE (talk_scared_flashlight)
Isn’t that a scary one.
MARC (laugh_giggle)
Are you scared quickly?
LIEVE (talk_angry_stubborn)
No!
MARC (talk_airquotes)
Prove it!
LIEVE (talk_apathetic)
Ok we go!
} “50 shades of grey” {
NIELS (talk_doubtful)
That is not for boys.
MARC (talk_happy_agree)
I agree.
NIELS (talk_apathetic)
But ok lets give the girls there way.
LIEVE (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks
} “The new dirty dancing” {
MARC (talk_doubtful)
For girls…
NIELS (talk_happy_agree)
I agree.
MARC (talk_apathetic)
But ok lets give the girls there way.
LIEVE (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks

}

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Try removing sound music_latinguitarpop :thinking:

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no i get "unexpected dialogue the nun :thinking:

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Now try doing this:

choice
“The Nun”{

No line should be skipped (there should be no space between them)

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