What is wrong with this script?

So when I play my script the placing is all wrong when the characters are kissing and when they walk please help?!?!
INT. LOCKER ROOM - DAY
@cut to zone 1
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@TOM spot 1.352 50 -16
@TOM moves to layer 3
@DAYA spot 1.262 203 -8
@DAYA moves to layer 3
@ARINA spot 0.852 406 154
@ARINA moves to layer 0
@CAMERON spot 0.882 360 152
@CAMERON moves to layer 0

@CAMERON spot 0.882 360 152 and ARINA faces right and CAMERON is kiss_passionate_loop and ARINA spot 0.852 406 154 and ARINA is kiss_passionate_loop_rear and CAMERON faces right
&DAYA spot 1.280 -130 0 in zone 1 at layer 3
@DAYA faces right
&TOM spot 1.280 -130 0 in zone 1 at layer 3
@TOM faces right
&DAYA spot 1.262 177 -17 AND TOM spot 1.352 50 -16
@DAYA faces left
@TOM is think_rubchin

    TOM (think_rubchin)
(What's that?)

    DAYA (talk_think_neutral)
Okay so I think we should--

@TOM is react_gasp_dismayed AND DAYA is think_rubchin

    TOM (talk_awkward_loop)
Daya turn around.

@DAYA is think_rubchin and DAYA faces right
@DAYA is react_shocked_gasp
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 320 236 to 216% in 3

    NARRATOR (DAYA)
With my own two eyes I saw Cameron and the nerd kissing in front of me.
I hate that b***h so much!

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
DAYA
|bold| Cameron!!

@CAMERON is react_startled_surprised and ARINA is react_gasp_dismayed and CAMERON faces left and ARINA faces left
@CAMERON spot 0.972 159 129
@CAMERON faces left and ARINA faces left and ARINA walks to spot 0.852 200 160 and ARINA is walk_scared_loop and CAMERON walks to spot 0.918 133 138
@ARINA is idle_awkward_scratch_loop and CAMERON is deepbreath and CAMERON faces left and ARINA faces left
@DAYA walks to spot 0.875 86 144 and DAYA is walk_angry_loop and TOM walks to spot 1.001 17 116 and TOM is walk_sad_loop
&DAYA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop and TOM is idle_sad_loop
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@TOM spot 1.001 17 117
@TOM moves to layer 3
@DAYA spot 0.875 86 144
@DAYA moves to layer 3
@ARINA spot 0.915 223 127
@ARINA moves to layer 0
@CAMERON spot 0.963 154 129
@CAMERON moves to layer 0

    CAMERON (talk_awkward_loop)
Daya how have you been?

@CAMERON is deepbreath
ARINA (react_startled_surprised)
Tom!

    ARINA (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
What you doing here with her?

    TOM (talk_awkward_loop)
Umm I-- we just..

@ARINA is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop and DAYA is eyeroll_sarcastic and TOM is deepbreath

    DAYA (talk_gossip)
I see you bring the nerd where we use to make out.

@CAMERON is deepbreath and ARINA is idle_sad_loop

    CAMERON (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Daya stop it.

@CAMERON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
DAYA (talk_gossip)
And to answer you question nerd

    DAYA (talk_shrug_neutral)
Can't a girl get some alone time with her boyfriend?

@TOM is react_startled_surprised and ARINA is react_gasp_dismayed and CAMERON is think_rubchin
@DAYA faces left
DAYA (kiss_cheek_give)
Go with it Tommy.

@TOM is deepbreath

    CAMERON (talk_think_neutral)
So you guys are coming with us to see Hamilton.

@DAYA faces right and DAYA is think_rubchin

    DAYA (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Yes yes we are.

@DAYA is idle_happy_loop

sound schoolbell

@TOM is deepbreath and DAYA is eyeroll_sarcastic and CAMERON is think_rubchin and ARINA is idle_sad_loop

    NARRATOR (TOM)
What just happened?
Well this will be awkward in class.

@transition fade out black

Yes but this is just the first episode I’ll give you the link when I have it all finished and edited

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The layers are not correct. For example, Cameron should be at layer 0 and Ariana should be at layer 1 when they kiss.

This thread might be helpful: HOW TO: Move Characters / Overlays to the Layers.

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Thanks