For starters the plot has to be good and unique. Nobody wants to keep reading the same bad boy pregnancy mafia story. You have to have originality in there somewhere. That’s the most important thing.
Secondly the directing, being able to code a scene and actually bring it to life is amazing. Basic coding is okay but it’s not the best.
What makes me happy in the story is when something interesting is going on whether it the Mc and the LI finally kiss or the school catches on fire basically anything that’ll make me want to keep reading. What makes me angry is when something like the best friend did something wrong to the Mc. That’ll also make me want to continue.