What mistake did I make in my Script?

Hello! I notice a warning in my script, it says that I need to use the word “in” before specifying the duration. The warnig symbol is next to the line:

label Leora_flashback_1

I also wanted to know how I can prevent from making whatever mistake I made again. Thanks so much for all the help!

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Can you screenshot the script to fully understand the problem?

Ah so you need to write in before you write the duration

Example:

@transition fade out black in 2

Or

@CHARACTER walks to spot (whatever) in 2

(You can change the duration by increasing and decreasing the numbers)

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INT. BLACK - NIGHT

@AUNT KAYSA enters from right to screen right

@LEORA enters from left to screen left

NARRATOR (ARI NICHELLE)

Meet Leora and her Aunt Kaysa.

@LEORA is talk_greet_shy

LEORA

Hi..

@AUNT KAYSA is talk_greet_neutral

AUNT KAYSA

Hello.

NARRATOR (ARI NICHELLE)

Okay, want to start from a flashback from Leora's memory or Her Aunt Kaysa?

choice

“LEORA”{

@LEORA is talk_explain_neutral

LEORA

Alright, I was living in a..

@transition fade out red 1.5

@transition fade out red 1.5

goto Leora_flashback_1

}

“AUNT KAYSA”{

@AUNT KAYSA is think_rubchin

AUNT KAYSA

Oh, well, when I found out that..

@transition fade out white 1.5

}

label Leora_flashback_1

EXT. DAMAGED TOWNHOUSE - DAY

@ADMINISTRATOR DANIELS walks to zone 2 AND YOUNG LEORA walks to zone 2

@zoom on YOUNG LEORA to 200% in 5

ADMINISTRATOR DANIELS (idle_happy_loop)

I promise you'll be alright here in Daniels Orphanage.

The staff here are very friendly and acknowledge the feelings of all the children in the Orphanage, they try their hardest 

to understand them the best they can.

@YOUNG LEORA is talk_armscrossed_sad_loop

YOUNG LEORA

I guess so.. 

This is my script, the warning symbol is next to label Leora_flashback_1. It tells me I need to use the word “in” before specifying the duration. Does this help more?

@transition fade out white in 1.5. :+1:

It kinda shows the exclamation mark on the wrong line, but this is the line it wants you to fix.

Also these. :+1:

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You seriously need to make a thread about directing lol you’re just so easy and smooth with it all the time :star_struck:

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I did what you said but the warning is still there, on the same line.

Eyyy, ty lol. :grin:

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Hmmmm… :thinking:

Maybe it’s complaining about this:

These would need a screen position, like “…walks to screen center in zone 2” :+1:

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Oh, alright, thank you! :sweat_smile: I didn’t notice that in my script. Thanks for pointing it out to me and being so helpful.

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Um… the warning is still there. Maybe there’s something missing in my script? I’m not sure and so confused, my review plays until you get to:

@ADMINISTRATOR DANIELS walks to zone 2 AND YOUNG LEORA walks to screen center in zone 2

@zoom on YOUNG LEORA to 200% in 5

    ADMINISTRATOR DANIELS (idle_happy_loop)
I promise you'll be alright here in Daniels Orphanage.
The staff here are very friendly and acknowledge the feelings of all the children in the Orphanage, they try their hardest to understand them the best they can.

@YOUNG LEORA is talk_armscrossed_sad_loop
YOUNG LEORA
I guess so…
It stops, it doesn’t show them doing these actions and stops completely at the background, nothing else plays out. Could this be the problem?

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That one needs a screen position or spot as well. :+1:

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Alright, thanks!:sweat_smile::blush:

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