This is about a gang/dangerous man btw. THIS IS NOT THE DESCRIPITION!!
A. One day you move out of your parents house and get to live in the big city for a job. You bump one day into him while working, there’s something odd about him so you decided to keep an eye on him. One day you find him shooting your co-worker. He sees you & you’re getting kidnapped and more…
B. One day you move out of your parents house and get to live in the big city with your friends. You go out to a club together and your friend gets drugged. All your other friends r occupied so you ask a stranger to help. Thats when you meet him. A day later you meet him again and you guys exchange numbers and begin to talk. 2 weeks later you go out with him on a date and things r starting to work. You don’t know his true self… will you ever find out?
What I meant was, that the co-worker of the MC got in trouble with the LI. And he decided to kill the co-worker but the MC was a witness. He decided to take her/kidnap her.
I think you may want to rethink this plot. Having the Li kill someone and then kidnap the MC is very problematic and makes the Li look quite toxic. I wouldn’t feel comfortable with this person being a Li.
The second plot sounds interesting. Maybe rethink the drugging bit though, I’d go with that one
I wouldn’t go down the usual route of the MC or her friend is drugged or pursued by a creepy person and the Li saves them. That doesn’t make them a hero, it makes them a decent person.
Heroic acts are different. They could lose their belongings in the club and he could pay for their cab home. She could fall in the club and he could help carry her to the hospital. Something like this?
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