What things make an Episode story unreadable?

That’s what I’m saying here. I appreciate if my words don’t get twisted.

I hate when authors literally give their characters a whole fake scene just to say the story will be continued. Like what was the point in that? Like U Wastin my time boo

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Characters being all different sizes. It’s distracting to say the least. Why is every girl coming up to the LI’s belly button?
While I concede that some of it is inexperience in the sizing/spotting… some feel super on purpose.

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I agree, when @/XxAlphaBetaxX first told me about it, I thought it was only on a few stories. But then I realized they are more common than I first thought

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It’s like short guys don’t exist! lol I remember a Episode Original that had the female LI looking like the Jolly Green Giant compared to the normal sized MC.

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Utterly annoying when you are reading it when the story is completed already

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That’s true, but writing a story with combined classic with any other style is hard as the females are the same size, but males are way taller than other styles

When the love interest is boring or overly jealous. I’ve seen to many stories where the LI is the most possesive or basic character you hate having in the story. Sometimes romance ruins a story.

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Bad boys. But RICH Bad Boys are personally even worse. Like their parents are some billionaires with a large business and they don’t care about it and just roam around everywhere spending money and being a “Bad Boy.” It’s annoying as hell.

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And where are the parents? Clearly it’s their money… Why are they not like “tf you trying to spend all of our money?” and take that AmEx back.

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Haha For real! :joy:

I guess their just too rich to care, and then the dad is like super rich and powerful and the mum is just there. And then the next thing you know, Another love interest walks in at some family dinner, :joy: :joy: :joy: :joy: :joy: :joy: :joy:

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Love triangles has started be a pet peeve of mine.

family dinner
Random : what up! I am in love with Mary-Sue, too!

Like, bro- what are you even doing in their house?

I knowww love triangles are really really starting to becoming annoying, especially when you have to choose :grimacing:

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Even with the choice- every story I’ve seen, the author obviously favors one over the other. So the 2nd LI is so flat and boring & you’re almost always forced to be with the one the author wants.

Exactly, I swear some authors can be salty as hell.

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For the whole best friend thing, I agree. For example, The anime fruits basket where they showed Tohru’s friends back stories and how they met, It maks their friendship more loveable and honestly makes the BFFs more likeable and realistic.

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