What's wrong with these choices?

Also, I would be soooo grateful if someone gave me a little example of how to go-ahead and do these scenes and then get back to the main branch of the story. Thank you!

AZRA (think_rubchin)
I really only have time to do 3 of these…

Well, I have to free the prisoner and meet with the Duke.

What other task should I take on?

choice
“Train the new maidens”{

AZRA (talk_exhausted)
The new maidens have no idea what they’re doing.

}

“Review loan applications”{

AZRA (talk_apathetic)
I probably should get a start on approving those loans

}

“Get Fabric from the market”{
AZRA (talk_excited_happy)
I’ve been dying to get this new fabric for my gown.

}

“Get skin revitalized”{
AZRA (talk_neutral_unsure)
My pores are going to kill me if I don’t revitalize them soon.

}

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i mean what’s wrong with it?

Looks to me like too many lines were skipped.

Acceptable:

“Choice 1”{

}”Choice 2”{

}

OR

“Choice 1”{

}
”Choice 2”{

}

But not:
“Choice 1”{

}

”Choice 2”{

}

Other than that, it should be good. :+1: After a choice, the story will continue to what follows right after.

NARR
Which choice?

choice
“Choice 1”{

}”Choice 2”{

}

NARR
We are now back in the main branch.

:grin::+1: