Looks to me like too many lines were skipped.
Acceptable:
“Choice 1”{
}”Choice 2”{
}
OR
“Choice 1”{
}
”Choice 2”{
}
But not:
“Choice 1”{
}
”Choice 2”{
}
Other than that, it should be good. 
After a choice, the story will continue to what follows right after.
NARR
Which choice?
choice
“Choice 1”{
}”Choice 2”{
}
NARR
We are now back in the main branch.
