Which description grabs your attention to read the story?

Unfortunate – a word that describes Tatyas life perfectly.
Psycho ex? Yup.
Dead parents? Oh yes.
Crush involved with a gang? Mhm.
Will she survive all this drama? We’ll see.

Tatyas life has been a series of unfortunate events. The only thing keeping her going is her love for law. Will the new hot prof keep her from achieving her goal?

Tatya’s goal is law, but will she break it trying to find love with her new hot professor?

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I think a shorter description with not very much info that resume a part of a story pretty well is better than a longer description with a lot of info that shows the reader most parts of the story. :thinking:

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I agree!!! :heart:

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Why the heck was my “bump” flagged? :joy::joy:

I really like these but I chose the second one because it didn’t reveal much of the story while describing what it is a bout. I like descriptions that show not tell :blush:

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idek its been happening to me too. people cant comment anything without being flagged. shame

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I’ll be using that!! Thank you so much!! :heart::heart_eyes:

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RIGHT??? It’s pissing me off.

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exactly its acc rlly annoying :expressionless::roll_eyes:

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