Which of these descriptions sounds better?

So I was going to make another story but I’m sort of conflicted over which of these description are better. Can you help?

  • “I never thought I’d be a target in a world of creatures thirsty for my blood, neither did I expect to lose myself in the process.”
  • “So desperate for an interesting life, I made a wish for one. Little did I know, a more interesting life was the last thing I wanted, especially if it involved losing everything I had.”
  • “After so long in the same places, a change was all I asked for. However, a change for the better comes with a consequence, involving payments of my blood.”

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