My name is KlutzEKat!
Some of you have already seen me on this forum but since I created a new account I changed my name from Lexxcisco to KlutzEKat. So lovely to meet you all again!
I have made a new story and I would love some feedback and would be interested in doing some read for reads! Let me know in the comments below what you think of it!.
Title: Awkwardly Me Genre: Comedy, Romance & A Little Adventure Author: KlutzEKat Description:Embarrassing & Awkward;
The two words that describe my life.
These stories are based on real events to show that no one is ever truly alone. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5962320156360704 Insta: episode.klutzekat
I wanted to give the readers a moment to kind of see the way I will be telling the story to decide if they would like to keep reading or not. I also wanted to give the readers a chance to customize the character before we continue! Sorry if you did not enjoy it!
Well I only read the first part of the “intro” and I couldn’t do it. I don’t wanna sound rude at all I just want to give you my honest opinion.
It made me cringe and tap as fast as I can to get through it. I just thought the humor was dry and it didn’t make me laugh at all. It just annoyed me. And I didn’t even finish the first chapter if you wanna call it that…
The last thing I wanna say is I don’t understand the whole author intro- author talking to their own characters thing. I Like I think of episode as a “sorta tv show thing” and I’ve never seen anything that has someone introduce things like that. It’s just weird to me… and the author talking to their characters…? I don’t know, but it’s odd at least to me.
So I’m sorry if I sounded rude but I don’t want to sugar coat it. I like Honest feedback so that’s what I give to other people. So best of luck with the rest of your story!
I appreciate the honest opinion! Everyone has different opinions and I personally really love the author intro! I see a decent amount of people use it and like that connection to the audience personally. The first chapter is short so that we can move directly to the stories that really matter. I also love shows and books that break the fourth wall so that is a thing I love to do!
Again appreciate the honest opinion and thank you for trying it out!
Title : Silent Whispers Author: Pending… Genre : Romance/Mystery Style: Limelight CC: Yesssss Description : When Summer break takes an unexpected turn, will you be able to handle the darkness that awaits you? A whirlwind of love, friends, laughter and fear. (LL) (CC) Chapters : 5 (ongoing) Cover:
If you do check out my story, it’s much appreciated! I’ve been working really hard on it, coffee is the only thing that kept me going. I hope you enjoy it. Much love. Also if you would like to do a R4R, just send me a message.
It would mean a lot to me if you checked out my story!
Title: Expect The Unexpected
Author: vy tran
Episodes: 1 and continuing
Desc: As the youngest triplet, Andie has never been in love before. During a tragic plane accident, Andie met 2 survivors that she has fallen in love with. What could go wrong?
So I checked out your first chapter and I’ll have to agree with the first two responders. It’s true that many writers do little snippets with their characters but, they also do an introductory chapter where they give readers a chance to see what the characters will be like and what the story is gonna be about.
With that said, based on the little that I did see, it looks like your directing is good lol
But, you are the author and you write your story however you want
It would mean a lot if you checked out my story Title: Just Another Day Author: Annswrites Genre: Drama (Romance) Episodes: 3(more coming!) CC: Yes Style: Limelight Description: A girl rebelling against her parents goes off to New York City to pursue her dreams unaware of the things she is going to encounter.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6707015823982592 Thank You!
@TamiRose@SmileyOcto & @AMagic
Thank you guys for your feedback! I will be changing the first chapter later today and when I update it would you guys mind giving me your thoughts? You don’t have to if you don’t want to, just wanted some extra feedback