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INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR

Episode one:The Begining of Pain

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT
@transition fade in black 4

@ASHARII enters from left to screen left

@ASHARII is react_gasp_dismayed

    ASHARII (idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop)
Gavin oh my god...

@ASHARII exits left AND ASHARII is run_cry_embarrassed_loop

@pan to zone 3

@GAVIN spot 0.840 114 224

@LILY spot 0.840 63 203

@GAVIN starts kiss_playful_loop

@LILY starts kiss_playful_loop_rear and LILY faces left

@pause for a beat

    GAVIN (eyeroll_sarcastic_atcamera)
Uh why is she always coming home so early all the time

    LILY (laugh_crackup)
So are you gonna go chase after her or what

    GAVIN (talk_shrug_neutral)
No lets just finish up here first

    GAVIN (talk_airquotes)
Then ill go pretend to care...

@pause for 3

@GAVIN starts kiss_playful_loop

@LILY starts kiss_playful_loop_rear

@pause for a beat